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| "Dark Side of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Love love love!
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2024 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best smut fic ever!!! So amazingly hot with sweetness sprinkled in
as well. I'm so greedy and want more of this world, haha. Amazing!
I absolutely love how you wrote these two. They are so perfectly in
character, especially knowing they have admitted their love and are
perfectly confident in their relationship, both sexual and
otherwise. This is exactly how I would see them acting. And I love
the idea of how the blood red moon would take away all of
Inuyasha's inhibitions and allow his youkai to come forward more. I
also know that Kagome would be loving and caring about all of his
youkai instincts and characteristics, making sure to let him know
she loves him no matter what. I also have a really weird thing
about loving when Kagome dirty talks and curses like you had her do
in this story. It's believable and not OOC imo. It's just an added
spice factor that I can't help but love. I really love when
Inuyasha is extremely dominant like this, but knowing Kagome's
spitfire personality, I love when she takes control as well. The
way you had her do just that towards the end while using the rosary
was so goddamned hot, I absolutely LOVED it. 100% amazing fiction!
| Title: Incredibly hot.
Reviewed By: InuYashasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2016 14:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pretty sure that was the hottest thing I have ever read in my
entire life. You certainly know your way around writing a good Inu
Kag lemon and this was monumentally flawless. I really hope you
keep writing in this idea because Oh Damn!
| Reviewed By: Emsky3177 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2015 14:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your first story and this one even more. I enjoyed how you
brought out Inu's yokai side and true tribute to Inu & Kag.
xoxo
| Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2013 21:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Goddess, I was so happy when I got the e-mail saying that you had a new story posted. I have been craving something new from you for a while now. I totally agree with Youkaineko about the reviews and about having a memory flash and just NEEDING to read a story again to relive it. I do it all the time. You are without a doubt my all-time favorite author on this site and you are the reason I keep coming back to this site. I have also joined AFF, as requested, and I'm going through the paces there, but I still find myself coming back to MM to get my Goddess fix...hehehe. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what you have for Inu & Co. next...many hugs;-) | Title: Wonderful!!
Reviewed By: Inufanficlover On: September 01, 2013 22:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooo happy you wrote a new one Goddess!! You are my favorite inuyasha fanfiction writer! As a matter a fact, I haven't been on this website for awhile and I decided to pay a visit here specifically because this site has more of your work than Fanfiction.com! Thank you! | Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2013 10:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm glad I looked at this because it gave me the idea to re-read "Total Eclipse." I forgot how much I liked that one. This one was good too, in a different sort of way. You are expanding your lemoney horizons! Thanks for the fun read. | Reviewed By: Mister Magic C On: August 30, 2013 22:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent one shot. I'm sorry your not getting more review love but I think mediaminer's review population is pretty much non existent. Well if you continue to write any more Inuyasha and Kagome fan fiction I will try to find it and leave a review. Thank you for writing this. Chris M | Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2013 15:05 PDT
Comment/Review:
It always makes me wonder when a well written story doesn't have reviews. Is it that people don't feel the need to leave those meaningless comments like "please update" or "what happens next" simply because it is a oneshot? Or is it that they see the authors name and decide that since they are so well known that no new accolades need to be given? Maybe they are simply in shock that someone actually wrote something that not only had a small bit of plot, but had characters being in character; used quotation marks to indicate speech and surprise, surprise actually had paragraphing. For me personally, I think the reason I didn't originally leave a review when I read it last night, had nothing to do with any of that, but merely that I tend to only leave comments when I notice a plot hole that needs to fixed or some minor detail that if changed could really enhance a story. And let's face it, you've been around the block a few times, you don't need those training wheels that so many other writers do. So I lurk and I read and reread the good parts and then I reread again months down the line when something triggers a memory that makes me want to revisit that story. Or when the endless sea of Inuyasha Fanfiction becomes inundated with drivel, then I seek out beloved old stories to replenish my obsession and once again reread those stories. And while I had read "Total Eclipse of the Heart" many, many times it never once occurred to me that it might need a sequel. Well, needed or not it was brilliantly done. And oddly reminded me just a little of butteryasha's writing style. And now that you have opened the door to sequels on a universe I hadn't really thought needed further exploration I can't help but wonder about all sorts of other possibilities. How would "serial killer" Inuyasha deal with less controlled circumstances? What if they were too far from the well to get back in time? What does a partial eclipse do? Or one that isn't visible in Japan because it happens during what for them would be day time? Do solar eclipses have any effect? How would a known psychopath deal with the inhibition reduction? Would they even notice the difference? Or are the effects different for every demon? And for the record I think Inuyasha becomes more of a sociopath than psychopath, he knows the difference between right and wrong, he just doesn't really care. |
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