"The Ghost of Christmas Present" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: _gigial_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2024 13:40 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its one of the best stories Ive read in the last couple months
| Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2015 09:35 PST Comment/Review:
Nice story. I like the progression from this one to the last one,
and Kagome's characterization seems natural. I understand that this
story didn't exactly have the right 'mood' for a full-blown lemon,
but I'm glad you gave us some insight concerning their sex life.
The part about him touching her while she's awake...I hadn't
thought of that. Now you have my imagination going. :)
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