| "Make Me Bad" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: September 06, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Vegeta told those idiots to shut up. I don't know how can stand them. Anyway, the levitation looked simple enough. Now all Bulma has to learn how to do is move thru the air. I think that'll take a little more effort. Vegeta watched Peter Pan? LOL. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chuckles* He sure TRIED to put the (future, heh) inlaws in their place. His speech was good and almost believeable ... until he grabbed her had as they exited. *hehehe*
geez louise. If I could learn ONE thing from Vegeta ... it would be to fly. *sigh* Wow ... she's so lucky. :)
O.O damn, they have GOT to stop this kiss and think nothing of it, thing. I mean, I can't believe he kissed her ... though, if I had been in HER shoes ...*smirks* ... he would've been lucky if I hadn't gotten him first! ;) I'm sure he just did it to calm her down, but I think he succeeded more in giving her her "happy thought."
Have you ever seen "Lois and Clark: The New Adventures of Superman?" *giggles* Well, when things got "intimate" or they simply kissed ... they usually ended up floating! :D There's food for thought. ^_~
Keep writing on all your fics ... but especially this one!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woo Hoo, this is so awesome...he's teaching her how to fly and...finding her interesting too. Very fascinating. Keep it up, i wanna read morreee. Morre i tell you mooooorrrreee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
*powering up* I need more badness!!!!
I just had a shitty conversation and now I want to be bad too! I'm trying to be mad, so I thought, "Hey, I'll read more of 'MakeMeBad' because I need a few lessons!
Of course, *forming a ki ball in her hand* I MIGHT settle for a little sour lemon! *smirks* I suppose a bit of "baaaaad"ness will suffice this time.
^_~ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 04, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm ALWAYS late. The emotion is tense, lovely job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Kids have always talked too much. The world needs lot of duck tape... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 02, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that sucks! No, not the chapter. The fact that Bulma has to give up her room is what I think really stinks. If those assholes want to sleep over they can do it in the back yard -_-. Yeah, I'm Vegetaesque in that department. Can't wait for them to leave, even though Bulma being in Veggie's room might make for some interesting moments ^_^. Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo, in the same bedroom together, allone. At night. Ooo laaaaaa laaaa!! ^^
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
Will there be some lemonly goodness??? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: August 31, 2002 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is too funny, 35!! Oh goosh, I gotta calm down. This is great. Update sooner |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: August 28, 2002 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far. Hope yu get the next chapter done soon! Watch out for those damn typos! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 28, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, she's only human and by the looks of it Veggie is gonna train her to death. I hope she doesn't end up getting hurt. Oh well, I'll have to wait to see what happens in the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even know you updated. I still like it though. What's gonna happen know that they've shared a moment? |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: August 25, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story...keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 24, 2002 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. Looks like Veggie was getting ideas of his own in the gravity room ^_~. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Heikgan On: August 24, 2002 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooOOOOOO i can't wait for the next chap i love this fic PWEASE update soon PWEASE and once more PWEASE |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2002 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THEY KISSED!! AWwwww.
Hehe, UPDATE SOON!! ^^
I LOVE YOUR FICS! |
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