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Title: Yessssss!
Reviewed By: EllyBean On: July 11, 2017 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite reads currently and I have been waiting
to see an update. I'm so glad you're writing again. And I'd also
like to send a bit of encouragement your way. It's hard to fight
those darker days but it is possible and I wish you all the best. I
hope to see more of your story soon. It is a phenomenal and
creatively written piece.
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Reviewed By: Sam On: October 08, 2016 16:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! Oooooo Sess is MAD! Good for Kags, though, for not
giving him an inch and protecting herself and her brother! I wonder
what it will be like if Inu and Kags meet....I always felt they had
a better brother/sister relationship.
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Reviewed By: Sam On: September 18, 2016 06:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, as usual! Super stoked that the story has picked
up and is getting exciting! Can't wait for next chapter! You never
disappoint!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: September 05, 2016 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no poor Kagome! I hope she's okay! Damn Sess - where are you to
save the day?!?!!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: August 25, 2016 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn your cliffy!!!! I want to know what happens lol!!!!
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Reviewed By: Michelle13 On: August 16, 2016 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this all in one day. Great story! Please don't abandon it! I
enjoy your writing style and the aggressiveness of your lemon. You
should also try yaoi!!!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: August 09, 2016 18:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HO-LY HELL! Well that was satisfying! My husband is going to enjoy
the perks of my reading your stories! Can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: August 04, 2016 16:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So excited that the action and romance part of the story has picked
up! Had to fan myself for a minute ;)
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Reviewed By: Sam On: August 03, 2016 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm....I would also like a piece of Sess lol. Can't wait for
more!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: August 01, 2016 17:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter - gave me a lot more insight into the characters. And
I enjoy their interaction so much! I'm dying to find out Kagome's
story and secret, and see her and Sess's relationship evolve! Can't
wait to read more :)
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Reviewed By: Sam On: July 28, 2016 17:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohhh Sess is a drug lord! Bad boy! I really enjoy the
interaction between him and Kagome. It will be fun to read the
chemistry they will no doubt have together! Keep it up, doll face -
I adore your stories!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: July 27, 2016 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Sess is a bad ass in this! I enjoy that this isn't just some
fluffy story with no substance. Keep going - I'm very excited to
keep reading!
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Reviewed By: MG725 On: July 26, 2016 08:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great original idea. Love the pairing.
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Reviewed By: Sam On: July 25, 2016 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray for this story! Can't wait to see what Kagome is hiding, and
what Sess's story in this is!
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Reviewed By: Sam On: July 25, 2016 07:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No flames here! I can't wait to see how their story plays out! I'm
always impressed by your writing, novice or not! I just wish the
chapters were longer becaus I read them so fast, lol! But I
understand they're shorter because you get them out fast. Can't
wait to see what's next!
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