| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2017 16:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
And this is why Inuyasha is my favourite. I love how as we read
through purity he continues to grow/mature but is still somehow the
character we were introduced to so long ago and love. You write him
wonderfully Sue. Hopefully his intervention as sensei, great uncle
and fellow hanyou will finally release chsrity from her emotional
prison. Oh and btw, weekend posts are A.W.E.S.O.M.E
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2017 12:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
And then some
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2017 11:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love, absolutely love, the way you write InuYasha. You have kept
him in charactor as he gets older and the way you have had him
mature is wonderful. How he handled Charity's guilt was perfect and
the way he gave her permission to cry just this once made me cry.I
love how you write these stories and this family. I will be a
fangirl till the day I cant read any more.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2017 08:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Weekend updates?! Yay. Yay. Yay. And I hope that Inuyasha can help
Charity. Does this mean they're going to Japan? Ben is going to run
into his dad...
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2017 16:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
Emotions are funny things and sometimes we forget how fierce they
can be when it seems we may loose something or someone we love. I'm
glad that Ben has been able to talk some sense into her and I hope
our resident foxy panther gets better soon. I laughed at the scene
between Toga, Cain and Ben, "house cats" indeed. Purity 2 seems so
long ago, I'll have to revisit it once you've finished taking us
through Friution. Though Sue...the best part of this entire chapter
for me was "Kyou-chan". Thanks for that and for the update.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2017 13:21 PDT
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I love that a few words from Ben comforts Charity when no one else
could get through, including her youkai. I am feeling a little
guilty I suspected Manami and Kyouhei of nefarious deeds earlier. I
really hope Kyouhei makes it out ok and not too damaged by this
mess with his parents. I hope Hect takes the news of his parents
deaths ok too.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2017 13:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm caught between elation at Charity's prowess in the defence of
her family and the creeping worry of Ben's condition. I'm so glad
Manami and Kyouhei were there/are there and Toga is on his way. But
doesn't this put Kyouhei in a more dangerous position?? *sigh*
Thanks for the update Sue.
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Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers
won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has
to be. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers
won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has
to be. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Damn this is good!
Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2017 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Another masterpiece. At least the Unkers
won't be bothering anybody again. Ben is going to be fine. He has
to be. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2017 15:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness... is Ben okay?!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2017 16:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wait, so Coral is a badass? How have you kept this a secret Sue?
I've read all of the Purity series and yet I can't remember this
being hinted at in the rest of the stories. You are a purposeful
writer so I'm sure this little nugget of information will only be
further illuminated at some point. I love how unwittingly, despite
centuries apart, Ben and Kyouhei are building a brotherly bond,
you've woven them together not only by the circumstances of their
upbringing but them discovering each other through their
interactions. As for Gunnar...I cannot wait to meet his mate until
then I'll be carefully cataloguing his denials alongside his
sisters. Thanks Sue
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Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other
ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this
one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I
went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish
and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol.
You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how
much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once
again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe
Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm
reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I
can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the
past characters all come together and both the men and women kick
some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from
the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping
themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they
all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone
regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing
genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you
don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other
ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this
one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I
went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish
and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol.
You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how
much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once
again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe
Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm
reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I
can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the
past characters all come together and both the men and women kick
some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from
the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping
themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they
all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone
regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing
genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you
don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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Title: Loving this story!!
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2017 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so enjoying this story. I somehow missed some of the other
ones and so I started at the beginning again. So I'm reading this
one (love love love it) and am on Purity 3 now but have to admit I
went from 2 to Purity 8 Vendetta and read it from start to finish
and now I'm hard pressed to contain myself and go back to 3. Lol.
You are such a good writer and I just wanted to let you know how
much I'm enjoying this story and rereading your past stories once
again. I'm thinking Ben's brother needs a strong woman ... maybe
Chelsea? :-) I can't wait for the next chapters. (Patience when I'm
reading is not one of my virtues. Lol) Anyway, thank you and I
can't wait to continue reading and I'm hoping we see some of the
past characters all come together and both the men and women kick
some upstart butts. These men need to see that keeping things from
the women is just plain stupid. They should be partners in keeping
themselves and the children safe. Communication is key. Heck, they
all need special gadgets and gizmos to communicate with everyone
regarding security. Okay ... I'm stopping now. You're the writing
genius so I'm sure you have this mapped out in your mind and if you
don't I'm sure your characters will speak to you themselves. :-)
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