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| "Heart of a Warrior" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2018 16:33 PST
Comment/Review:
Well done, so very well done. I loved the original one shot, but
this rewrite is wonderful. You tackled a subject that is so very
previlent in todays society, and did so with respect, courtesy,
without being condisending or maudlin. I absolutely loved it and
can't wait to read what ever you come up with next.
| Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2018 16:14 PST
Comment/Review:
As a fan of the purity universe you did a awesome job keeping
everyone as Sue has. I loved reading inuyasha, you captured him
perfectly. The soldiers were beautifully written and my heart broke
for them and captain
| Title: Edits
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2018 07:23 PST
Comment/Review:
I am skipping the ratings; they don't mean a whole lot to me. Read
through the edits and they all work very nicely, rounding out the
oneshot even better than it already was! It was very interesting to
see the different aspects that you opted to add, and I'm looking
forward to the rest of the tale to come!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2017 16:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous job! Awesome one-shot!
| Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2017 14:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
this one shot is beyond awesome. you brought up a lot of points
that need to have some serious attention paid to them in RL. you
did a wonderful job of keeping everyone in charactor in the Purity
universe. Well done, and Gin believing that sooner or later sitting
Cain will work was hysterical, I laughed until I had tears running
down my face, specially when Kagome offered to repower Inu's
Kotodama. Very well done.
| Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: Athena Evarinya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2017 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, love, love it! You've done a wonderful job of writing the
characters that if your name wasn't on it, I would have thought
Sueric wrote it herself. You didn't perchance bleed her of some of
her blood to sacrifice on an altar or something? LOL Favorite part,
well favorite comedic part that sticks out in my mind is Gin trying
to Osuwari Cain. I think I may have busted a kidney laughing over
it.
| Reviewed By: Gin_Hayashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2017 10:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is awesome stuff, Im already invested in these characters I
just met. I always enjoy some dogboy adventures too. The youkai
role in military is an aspect on this universe that seems
interesting, and I do hope Captain recovers. Great job, you're even
Sue-approved. ^.^
| Title: D'awwwww!
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2017 20:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
(Yes, I realize I already reviewed on Ao3. Too damn bad!) I really
like this oneshot. It's a lot of fun to see InuYasha doing what he
does best! I really appreciate the care you took in crafting the
characters to keep them as true to your perception of them as you
possibly could, and you did well! It was just a lot of fun, despite
the angsty tone overall, and seeing Gin try to osuwari Cain? Well,
that's pretty damn priceless LOL! Thanks for loving the characters
enough to want to play with them in an interesting and involving
situation of your own! Nicely done! Thank you for caring enough to
write this down!
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