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| "Forms of Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ] | Reviewed By: Gamen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2017 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the (well justified) X rating there's no smut, so don't
read this expecting a smut-heavy fic like those A-Z was writing
years ago. It does not suffer for the lack though, and A-Z's old
stories are still around for re-reading if you enjoy quality smut
(Miscalculation excepted...). For those who care about such
details, GATE doesn't explicitly show up until this part is mostly
over (though its harsher/realistic reality is there from the start)
and the story is mostly concerned with the TWHE part of the
crossover. There's plenty of nation building and Isekai knowledge
transfer if that's your thing, unless you enjoy it in excess. There
are a few spellcheck typos (I didn't write them down, alas). I
heartily recommend it.
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