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| "While You Were Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2017 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha. Can't imagine the depth of his loneliness, even with
friends who care deeply for him. But at least we all know this
moment of angst has a happy ending, that he will, indeed, he
granted his miracle. I'm looking forward to any additional mini
stories that might pop up in this collection. Good job!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2017 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww... Chapter two was very sweet. I'm not surprised Shippou
ended up screwing up and waking the twins, LOL. I figured
something was going to happen so that Inuyasha wasn't just
watching them peacefully all night. I like the mini twist (not
really a twist when the manga doesn't specify one way or the other)
that Inuyasha himself is the one who came up with "Uncle Inu" LOL.
Hey whatever it takes to get them to stop crying, I agree.
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2017 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see something new from you! Decided to review it here
because most people don't. In fact I've only read the first
chapter/story so far, so you'll be getting two more reviews after
this one. I really liked this first one, and how you had Inuyasha
and Kouga interact with each other. Completely in-character for how
mature they'd both be at this stage in the game. Good job!
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