| "Something New" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Wowza
Reviewed By: Charlee On: June 22, 2018 09:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was hot! like 9000 Scoville Heat Units HOT! please write
Kagome's retaliation, I beg you.
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Reviewed By: Sillystrings On: January 02, 2018 01:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked how you are able to set up atmosphere and tone
without heavy use of dialogue. and I really appreciate you making
this first-person limited and not revealing Kagome's thoughts, just
Inuyasha's ideas of what she might be thinking. I'm looking forward
to reading more of your work. I think Kagome ravishing Inuyasha's
sword would be fun, exploring her confidence and awkwardness is
something I think you could execute well. Best! -SS
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Reviewed By: Sillystrings On: January 02, 2018 01:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked how you are able to set up atmosphere and tone
without heavy use of dialogue. and I really appreciate you making
this first-person limited and not revealing Kagome's thoughts, just
Inuyasha's ideas of what she might be thinking. I'm looking forward
to reading more of your work. I think Kagome ravishing Inuyasha's
sword would be fun, exploring her confidence and awkwardness is
something I think you could execute well. Best! -SS
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Reviewed By: Sillystrings On: January 02, 2018 01:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked how you are able to set up atmosphere and tone
without heavy use of dialogue. and I really appreciate you making
this first-person limited and not revealing Kagome's thoughts, just
Inuyasha's ideas of what she might be thinking. I'm looking forward
to reading more of your work. I think Kagome ravishing Inuyasha's
sword would be fun, exploring her confidence and awkwardness is
something I think you could execute well. Best! -SS
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Reviewed By: Sillystrings On: January 02, 2018 01:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked how you are able to set up atmosphere and tone
without heavy use of dialogue. and I really appreciate you making
this first-person limited and not revealing Kagome's thoughts, just
Inuyasha's ideas of what she might be thinking. I'm looking forward
to reading more of your work. I think Kagome ravishing Inuyasha's
sword would be fun, exploring her confidence and awkwardness is
something I think you could execute well. Best! -SS
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2017 17:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw this back when you first posted it but wouldn't let myself
read it until I got further along in my Christmas fic. Holy shit
that was good! I also really loved the way there wasn't a single
bit of dialog shared between them. They know each other so well; I
fully believe they could carry on a wordless conversation with just
their looks, like you portrayed. And does that little question mark
at the end mean you're contemplating a sequel? I would love
to see what Kagome has in mind, if you do wind up making a Part 2.
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Reviewed By: Aniareliza On: November 23, 2017 08:46 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I just wanted to say I hope you continue writing here. I've
been visiting mediaminer for 10 years, and you are my last top 5
writters still writing inuyasha fanfict that counts. It sucks,
there used to be a big pool of awesome writers. (Or i grew up) but
your are a top poster here, don't forget that.
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