| "Purity Redux: Vivication" Reviews/Comments [ 165 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2018 17:51 PST
Comment/Review:
Didn't realize I had my locations mixed up... lol that's ok. Oh
man... Sesshomaru pounding on Fais door... the butler yelling he's
not home... the mental imagine is cracking me up! And now he's
gonna get a call from his wife.. "oh Fai-sama isn't home? That's
because he just left here. Yall might wanna look into flights home"
Lolololol anyways, till next time Sue :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2018 17:30 PST
Comment/Review:
So close yet so far Fai but hang in there! Let's just hope Saori
doesn't run away before he gets a chance to "offer her a job". Gah.
I think Morio needs to give some lessons in identifying and
persuing ones mate.
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2018 16:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Snap! I didn't think about Seiji and Sesshoumaru missing Fai and
vice versa. Betcha Kaugra was on the phone to her mate as soon as
Fai left.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2018 06:28 PST
Comment/Review:
At least one of the brothers has his head screwed on right, the
reunion should have happened asap. Though with Fai in Tokyo, Yerik
on a hunt this unnamed threat remains unchecked and has space to
run a muck in their absence. I do hope Fai actually gets on that
flight.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2018 19:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Well with their kind of luck, Saori is gonna run into Yerick in
Moscow and Fai will just end up with Sesshomaru lolol maybe Fais
number will still be in his recent call list. Long shot I imagine
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2018 19:23 PST
Comment/Review:
At least Yerik knows what is going on. Good for him getting Fai a
flight to Tokyo. Everybody else acts like they have a hunch, but
are scared to say it out loud. I'm on pins and needles to see the
reunion of Fai and Saori.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2018 17:42 PST
Comment/Review:
This is one example of how sometimes dreams are better than
reality. I'm so glad that they were able to find each other again,
even if it was just for a short time. That means Fai needs to get
it in gear! Omg if that were to happen... I'll probably have to
save the chapter for at home so I don't start cracking up at work!
They are both such serious men lol
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2018 18:31 PST
Comment/Review:
Poor Saori. She was catching it from all sides. I don't blame her
for being upset. I get q bad feeling about that Evengi. I don't
trust him.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2018 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
He laughed!! Well the only person he hasn't called is Fai... and
maybe he'll just happen to ask if Fai thinks his granddaughter is
beautiful :) loved it Sue
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Reviewed By: M On: January 16, 2018 18:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awhhh such a cute chapter, love it! Keep it up please. :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2018 17:50 PST
Comment/Review:
He laughs, the great and terrible Sesshoumaru, the Inu no Taisho -
laughs (and no one died). A something tells me, like all good
loving parents that inside him lays a matchmaker. Poor Fai is
suffering isn't he? Perhaps the distance will help him recognise
what he is feeling. I do wonder what will happen next. Thanks for
the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: Favorite Author On: January 16, 2018 17:35 PST
Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing, it's incredibly beautiful. I often
forget this is an InuYasha continuation, you've built an amazing
universe out of the source material. Thank you so much for
continuing to write and as long as you keep posting, I'll keep
reading!!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2018 19:39 PST
Comment/Review:
I just love how her mind wanders when she's talking out loud lol
and fai needs to use his taiyourkai powers at the orphanage to get
her phone number lol I have faith in him
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Reviewed By: DNSora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2018 13:29 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my, I feel so bad for Fai. He had no idea what he was stepping
into... I wonder how he's doing?
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2018 19:28 PST
Comment/Review:
That was sooooo worth the wait! Poor Fai. He'll never be the same
after that. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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