| "Purity Redux: Anhanguera" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2018 20:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was truly satisfying. Bravo. I've been waiting for that bitch
Domajin to die for a while now and it was worth the wait. You don't
fuck with 5
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Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2018 13:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really wasn't expecting a chapter so soon, but I'm really glad
you posted this. The chapter is powerful and emotional, I can feel
Diego screaming inside the cold Caipora demeanor. Pablo had it
coming, I only hope the aren't negative consequences for poor
little Five. I like her a lot.
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2018 18:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
Holy shit... Well Pablo is a dumbass and should have known
something was coming after the other night. I hope the bitch
dies... if he doesn't it could create a problem. Probably will
either way really... and this project from Domajin sounds like a
bad idea all rolled together. Caipora better watch his ass while
he's out there..
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2018 10:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aww he bought her a coloring book! It's depressing that she doesn't
know what a surprise is, but being a slave that doesn't shock me.
It sounds like things are starting to boil up in him...
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2018 12:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
It amazes my how much I love it when you write angst. I was
mesmorized by the depth of emotion I felt when I firt read Torrent,
but this is taking it to a whole new level. Oh man, Domajin needs
to be put down like a mad dog, and I hope it is Anhanguera that
does it...Domajin just cost him 2 valuable slaves, and that is very
bad for business, isn't it. Bwahahahahahahahahahaha
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Paola On: March 12, 2018 06:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...god... This chapter has left me feeling a bit raw and
emotional. It makes me so sad to know that Caipora is bien forced
to do all of those things. I’m happy he has 5
with him now though. I really want Domajin dead!
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Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2018 01:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kill the Dickajin!!!! I'm guessing there's more to go before his
untimely demise, but I can hope, can't I?
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2018 16:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
You know what... I think he should just kill the bastards Domajin
and then go have a conversation with Anhanguera about
how he was fucking insane and needed to die. Bahhhhhhh well here's
hoping Pablo died at least lol
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2018 14:57 PST
Comment/Review:
Domajin has to be stupider than I thought if he really does try and
start some shit with Caipora after he just finished healing. I hope
he kills him slowly.
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Paola On: February 25, 2018 14:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is dark but beautiful. I can’t wait
to see what happens next! I have been reading your stories since I
don’t know how many years ago. You are so
talented and creative and you have me hooked!! Ps. I really
can’t wait to find out
Diego’s true identity...
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2018 18:35 PST
Comment/Review:
Poor five... watching her master go thru that when he's the best
she's ever known.. I definately had a feeling that Domajin wasn't
gonna allow the other night to happen without some kind of
consequences since he's weirdly in love with Caipora. That last
little bit when he finally broke down and cried... I'm so glad five
hugged him cause I certainly wanted too
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2018 15:48 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy shit. Talk about a massive orgy lol and that's what you were
talking about, twincest for. Makes more sense now lol what was up
with that agent with the weird wrist attack thing? We will have to
wait and see... and oh great, just what five didn't need to see...
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Title: Mind blowing!!!!
Reviewed By: AvinPhi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2018 11:01 PST
Comment/Review:
I officially love Five. What was that, with the agent of Eduardo?
Well, I guess I'll just have to wait... I loved the chapter. Long
and full
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2018 20:31 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm really hoping Domajin doesn't find out about 5. I really think
Caipora would kill him if he did something terrible to her. Maybe
that's the line. He didn't break this time, no one's pet indeed
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Reviewed By: Emy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2018 10:37 PST
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit! I am so nervous for what
Domajin will do next.. Will he find out about Caipora's special
relationship with 5? Or will he continue to torture Caipora until
the last of his sanity breaks. You have created a narrative from a
difficullt perspective and I appreciate it ^-^
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