| "Pleading Truths" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 16:40 CDT
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I've been thinking about this story, and I think I have another idea!
Vegeta: Yes, she leads such an exciting life that she sits around thinking about the DBZ stories she reads on the net.
ssjprincess: Your right, Vegeta, but that's not the point. :)
This story has just kind of stuck with me. I'm dying to figure out what the heck is going on. This story has me captivated!
Anyway, my idea... Vegeta is turning into one of those T-rex dinosaurs that are always running around on DBZ. *smiles at her own brillance*
Vegeta: O_o Onna.
ssjprincess: *still smiling* Yes, Vegeta.
Vegeta: Stop.
ssjprincess: *brow furrows in confusing* Stop? Stop what?
Vegeta: Thinking. Just don't do it.
ssjprincess: *pouts and grumbles* I liked my idea.... he thinks he's so smart... I don't see him making any guesses_
Vegeta: I'm not guessing because I already know.
ssjprincess: *eyes Vegeta skeptically* You do, do you.... then what is it? What are you turning into, Mr. Know-It_All?
Vegeta: *silence*
ssjprincess: Well?
Vegeta: Uh.... I'm not telling you because... because I am the Saiyan Prince! I don't have to if I don't want to! *crosses his arms and scowls*
ssjprincess: Yeaaahh, right. Anyway, Sorry for bugging you Kahlan. I just had to throw that guess into the hat. :)I'll be waiting for an update. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 23, 2002 17:32 CDT
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mint skittles? i've never heard of them but they sound good...
anyway, i have no idea what's happening to vegeta, but i love the story! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 23:32 CDT
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Well, I don't think I'm any closer to figuring this riddle out. What could be happening to Vegeta? Maybe his DNA has been tampered with? Or maybe not....
Vegeta: *rolls his eyes* Any more absurd guesses?
ssjprincess: Maybe he's turning into a jaguar?
Vegeta: You already covered that with the ape, wolf, panther guess.
ssjprincess: Not so! A completely different animal.
Vegeta: Whatever.
ssjprincess: Oh geez, I don't know. I know! Maybe because of his selfishness he was turned into a llhama by a witch! Yeah, that's it!
Vegeta: O_o; Onna.... that's a Disney movie.
ssjprincess: So it is. hehehe I don't know what's happening to Vegeta yet. I guess I'll have to go read the next chapter and see if it enlightens me. Another marvelous chapter by the way. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 22:59 CDT
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Hi there! I can't believe I'm so behind on all of your fics. *sighs* I have been so busy of late. But you don't want to hear about all that now do you? :)
Vegeta: Nothing gets by you does it?
ssjprincess: Hush, Vegeta. I don't remember asking you for your opinion on anything.
Vegeta: *shrugs* Am I supposed to care?
ssjprincess: *waves Vegeta off in total disregard* Anyway, this is a review so I should review. I like this! Very interesting, yet perplexing at the same time. I suppose I'll make my guess at what is going on, I'll probably be wrong though. My first guess would be that Vegeta is turning into a werewolf, but I think that's just *too* obvious. :)
So maybe.... maybe he's turning into an ape.... a panther maybe? Hmmmmm....
Vegeta: She thinking. Onna, don't strain yourself. *smirk*
ssjprincess: *growls her indignation* The only thing I'm going to strain is my arm as I swing the frying pan at your thick head!
Vegeta: *chuckles*
ssjprincess: Let's see.... maybe Vegeta is going insane.... or maybe another alien has messed with our favorite Saiyan? Hmmm....
Oh, I don't know... I guess I'll have to go to the next chapter and see if I can figure anything else out. Great chapter, by the way. :) |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: September 22, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I'll take a guess. I think he transforms into a smaller version of Ozaroo(or going ape). |
Reviewed By: louie On: September 10, 2002 14:11 CDT
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WOW... UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is the BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dont make us wait for the next chapter!!!!!...lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 10, 2002 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you've got me. It's obvious that Vegeta goes thru a transformation followed by a killing spree. I'm thinking more along the lines of a big cat (tiger, lion-loin to JB ^_^ sorry I couldn't resist). His loss of appetite is what gets me. Is he getting used to raw meat to the point of not being interested in regular food? I can't wait to find out more. Oh btw, excellent chapter. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Kat (Origynalsyn22@aol.com) On: September 10, 2002 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused, but it kinda makes me think he's shape shifting at night...kinda like Wolf. That werewolf movie with that dude who's name i can't remember...Jack Nickleson i think...i bet i even spelled his last name wrong. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2002 22:30 CDT
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This is great! What's happening to Vegeta???? Is he going insane????? I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't make me wait too long! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 14, 2002 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goten: *looks at Jb* What's a lemon?
Jb: *glares at Kahlan* Just great! You're going to krupt the child and ChiChi's never going to let me hear the end of it. *frowns at Vegeta* What are you smirking at?
Vegeta: I was just wondering who you're going to find for next chapter now that your precious Goten is out.
JB: *crosses arms* Don't worry. I'll find someone.
Vegeta: *grunts* Yeah right.
JB: *rolls eyes* Anyway, Goten she said no to lizard so what do you want to try this chapter.
Goten: Uh.....let's go with a wolverine.
JB: *eyes wide* Why's that?
Goten: *shrugs* Just seems to roll off the tongue.
JB: Okay...*turns to Kahlan* You heard the man. Loved the chappie by the way. You know I love all you write. Oh and why don't I get the prize?! It was Goten that wanted candy not me! *pouts* Fine! Be that way!-JB |
Reviewed By: chibi On: September 04, 2002 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very intriguing~~ please write more >D |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn... I don't know. I would go with the werewolf idea but it seems too obvious. Maybe a monkey...or cow...possibly an ant... giraffi maybe...
Vegeta: *shakes head sadly and pinches the bridge of his nose* Just stop.
JB: *insulted* Well at least I'm guessing!
Vegeta: But it's so sad to listen to you. Just let it go.
JB: *frowns* You're not even suppose to be here anyway. *turns to co-reviewer* What do you think?
Goten: I like cows. Let's go with the cow.
JB: *smiles* Okay! Sounds good to me! *turns to Kahlan* Goten and me cast our vote for a cow.
Vegeta: *looks at Kahlan and shakes his head then turns and walks away*
Goten: I really hope we're right! Do we get a prize if we are?
JB: I don't know. *turns to Kahlan* Do we? Let's know in the next chapter. See ya then.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very interesting. My guess is that Veggie is somehow turning into a werewolf or a panther and is taking advantage of the wildlife in the woods behind CC. Maybe I'm wrong but the italics talk about hunting down prey, burying it and marking the spot. I'm not even gonna ask if this was inspired by another one of your dreams O_o. I really like this fic and I can't wait to see where you're gonna go with it. I'm gonna read it again and see if I can come up with something else. |
Reviewed By: louie On: August 20, 2002 19:19 CDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was ausome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is 1 Ausome Fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Aeris is dead [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 17:47 CDT
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Hey I like this story. Hmm, whatever it is, it has something to do with the moon, and Vegeta transforming into something. Maybe a werewolf. Yeah, moi liked it, keep up the good work-and update soon!! |
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