| "Playing with Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryukai On: December 23, 2002 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! You finally updated! I've waited so long for this chapter. I really liked it, apparently my wait wasn't for nothing. Great descriptions I love your writing style, your grammar/spelling are fantastic. Can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: MateOfVeggie On: December 20, 2002 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Love the fic! This is the first firefighter b/v story I have come across and I must say that it will be a hard one to rival. I can't wait to read more soon and hope to see a little action between the pair. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: raska On: December 18, 2002 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: G>J> On: December 17, 2002 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
hey glad to see you decided to join the living again. gr8 chapter to start going w/ again. I hope you update quickier this time though. As for the story itself you have gr8 descriptions of what it would feel like to be there. GR8 job overall. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
oh yeah!! about the fanart...I might be able to draw something for you, but my art work is crappy itself, and alot of ppl hate it!! x_-"
but anyways, check out my DBZ fanart, the ones which are done in my style like the manga and stuff. It's not soo good, but i drew those a while ago and I've improved a bit. If you like my style and is interesting email me or mention it in your next chapter ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT FIRE!!
you're great at writing action scences!! ^^
I loved it!!
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 09:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying your work, please continue to update. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Don't worry about how long it takes I did the same on my last one. Rather have a good chapter than a crappy one....
DBZVegeta |
Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 18:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I am really looking forward to reading more. I like this fic alot. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: MidnightMinstrel On: October 07, 2002 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story!please finish it!i really want to know what happens.keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: joen On: September 23, 2002 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea behind the fic. Definitely original...I especially love the fact that you don't have Bulma, Chi Chi and 18 as some helpless damsels in need of saving but on equal footing with the guys. |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2002 08:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its great only in the beginning was it a bit hard to understand but the other chapters became better and better .I hope you update soon pleassseeee!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWESOMENESS! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: September 06, 2002 07:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Alright...maybe I lied about having it out in a week...my classes caught me off guard, but I'll have it out in no time since i'm home all weekend. By the way, this fic is getting better by the moment. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 07:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great, and I'll take up the challenge, just give me a week and I'll have it out for you to see. Hopefully I won't make Goku look like a dork...I have problems drawing him of all people. |
Reviewed By: werqwerqwer On: August 26, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goodi like. |
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