| "College Reunion, or Correcting a Past Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: T.K On: June 19, 2022 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Finale Ayaka Momona and his friends got what they deserved
and I’m also glad Kari and TK got their Happily Ever after as well
as the rest of the characters
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Title: Chapter 12 revised
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2022 16:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Mamota and his buddies get what they deserve, cowards like
him can’t accept that the girl they love is someone else’s and
deciding to kidnap her and rape her is gone WAY TOO FAR!. Will the
Japanese SWAT team be called in cause I think that will be needed
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2022 18:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
I hope they rescue Kari and Akaya and her friends get what they
deserve I just hope TK doesn’t die
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Title: Another Chapter
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2022 06:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
When will the next chapter come up
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2022 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!, I'm glad they are finally back together even if Kari
did cheat on TK, he never stopped loving her even when they were
apart can't wait for next chapter R80
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2022 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really awesome I hope that those two get together I'm really glad
Kari chose to tell TK about her disloyalty in their relationship
rather than him finding out the hard way it shows how much remorse
she has for her terrible mistake
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Title: The story
Reviewed By: Gadget30thAnniveresary [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2022 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad Kari realized her mistake and told TK herself
rather than TK finding out the hard way but I think They should
definitely get back together if not it's understandable I really
liked this Story when will you update again?
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Reviewed By: xinbra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2022 16:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!
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Reviewed By: xinbra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2022 16:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!
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