| "The Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: kookie On: September 11, 2002 09:00 CDT
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ok ok you've guilted me into reviewing! I usually don't read t/p stories, but I've really enjoyed yours--I hope you write another chapter to tie things up! |
Reviewed By: chandelle On: September 09, 2002 21:04 CDT
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It could be that I am simply just a hopeless romantic, but the pairing of Trunks and Pan is not that impossible...obviously not while she is in High school. Sure 13 year age difference seems like a lot~but with the way sayians supposedly age in the fiction world whats 13 years. It could also be that I chased after a man 14 years older than me when I was only 25, nothing ever came of it...however I know that when love comes into our lives who are we to turn it away~could miss out on forever~AND for what, something trivial like age difference. Gah! oh well if you all think I am twisted~its only my opinion.
I enjoyed your writing and can't wait till the next chapter~ gotta love tragdey and angst. |
Reviewed By: Digi (not signed in) On: September 08, 2002 18:40 CDT
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Ah! That's it?! Hurry up with chapter 4! :D |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, someone who mentions the fact that Trunks is roughly over a decade over than Pan. It gets kind of sickening to read all these damn love stories between them knowing this. That's just me though. I like it and I note the simularity to a book I read once. But I wont tell. |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
Wow! Wow. This is so... ...WOW!
Does WOW cover it? :)
Your style is so incredibly unique, but almost descriptive at the same time. The feat you are attempting (reciting a story.. you won't hear someone telling a story being totally descriptive, yet you manage to do it so well) is really hard. You're capturing the unlikely (and in my opinion a ridiculous fanfare) romance of Trunks and Pan, making it so realistic.. Wow. This is fabulous. Please, if anything, keep up the good work and get out the next chapter soon. :)
~erie. |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 04, 2002 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good fic...i like it |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest (too lazy to sign in) On: September 04, 2002 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe my luck today! Not only do I get out of my math class early but then I come to the computer lab before heading home and find this. Excellent chapter I must say. You'd think after all his vast experince that Trunks would know how to protect himself from this type of stuff. And just when things were going good to. Kind of sad really. But then you think about the fact that he's 28 and sleeping with a 15 year old and then you don't feel as sorry for him. I'm going to take a wild guess and say that my earlier idea came to fruit and that the lovable purple hared Saiyan landed himself in the big. The Gohan-butt kicking part hasn't taken place but it's still early in the story. I'm probably wrong but it's just a guess. Thanks for the dedication but I must tell you that I didn't write all those things because they were the nice thing to say and I thought you'd like to hear them. I wrote them because they're true and you should be extremely proud of this and all your fics. Well my review is getting pretty long so I'll wrap it up by saying that since you updated so quickly that I'm going to go right now and start working the next chapter of WYLE just for you. I mean it. I'm going right now. Really...uh okay bye.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Trunks is going to jail for the rest of his life and if he every gets out on parole Gohan is gonna kick his ass from Satan City to the West Capital and back again. Normally if I were reading a story and the herione is 14 and the hero is 27, I'd pretty much be done with it. That right there should tell you just how good this is and how you must continue it as soon as possible. I have got to be the luckiest person on Earth to have just started reading this at school today and then get home and find that it's been update. I must be truly blessed. Man I can't tell you enough how I'm waiting for an updte on this fic. I'll also have you know that this is the first Trunks/Pan I've continued reading past the fist paragraph. Anyhoo, UPDATE!!!!! Sorry got a little excited.-JB |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER UP? |
Reviewed By: Digi (not signed in) On: August 30, 2002 14:59 CDT
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I'm enjoying the fic even more! Thanks so much for making that chapter a longer one, now I'll have more to live on til you update again. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: August 30, 2002 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say. This is so awesome. I started reading this before my last class and was late then came right back afterwards to finish. I don't buy the whole Pan and Trunks idea either because, as like my third favorite character, I don't like the idea of Trunks as a child molester but this is really good and I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter. You probably won't believe this but I was planning on a sequel to Willpower that would turn out to be like a Trunks/Pan tragedy as well. I guess great minds think a like. Anyway as said before I'm about to be late for my math class but I want you to know this is great and I really, really can't wait for your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: idy On: August 24, 2002 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,that was really good.im wondering who this vistor is.but anyways i really like ur story.so i hope u can continue ur story.keep up the good writing. |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting. I'd really like to see where this goes. I'm normally a T/P fan, however I'd like to see where you are going with this. To be honest, though, more than anything, your writing style was what caught my eye. It's very different from the normal "he said, she said" styles you'll find in most fanfics. Drop me an email at AmethystFaerie@animevortex.org when you decide to update if you could. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2002 14:03 CDT
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Hmmm....
*Freudian accent* Veeeeeeeeery eenterestink....
Now you just have to update so I can figure out what the hell's going on... |
Reviewed By: Nissa On: September 14, 2002 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story...and you should definately do another chapter |
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