"Little Inu Yasha" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Nymph On: June 19, 2003 22:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome! Please update soon! I can imagine Inu Yasha as a puppy! *_* SO CUUUUUUTE!!! |
Reviewed By: Brooke Roth On: June 05, 2003 11:09 CDT Comment/Review: Please continue the story. I think it is so funny^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: May 24, 2003 16:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story Pretty please write more cuz this is a cool fanfic |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGirl On: February 02, 2003 18:44 CST Comment/Review: Arale:AWWWW!!!!! Chibi Inuyasha is so cute!
Inuyasha: I ain't cute you baka!
Arale:(grabs his ear and tugs, making him yelp)
Quiet Inuyasha, you're almost as bad as Vegeta.
Inuyasha:Grr |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 01:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh no!! You've got "the block" TOO!?!?!? *runs for the hills*
*peek over the snowcaps* Suggestions?? Um... are there going to be any pairings in this? Like Inu/Kag (butONLY if he gets big again!!!) OR...... *braces for the smack*.......Sess/Kag? *shrugs* I don't know. |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: January 19, 2003 20:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this story please write more i to see more!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu On: December 21, 2002 21:41 CST Comment/Review: please continue, very funny |
Reviewed By: Shiari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 20:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: heyo... this is really cute so far... but I have a couple suggestions.
One... if your computer has a spell-chech you should use it...
Two... since some words are wrong, though spelled correctly, I suggest you get a beta-reader. That ways they can double check everything and suggest things that need improvement.
I beta for several people already... but I'm more than willing to go after your fic, if you wish it. |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 18:21 CST Comment/Review: that is so Kawaii! i can totally imagine that! a chibi-inuyasha! aaaaaaaaaaw
*picks up Chibi Inuyasha and starts sqeezing him*
Soo adorable!
Keep on writing! i want to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Keade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 15:20 CST Comment/Review: i realy like it.. ihope you write more soon |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: December 18, 2002 10:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I want a little Inuyasha! *thinks how cute the older one is and changes mind!* Very funny and sweet. |
Reviewed By: yushiemie On: December 17, 2002 15:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is sooooo funny,but i bet i can guess who`s watching them,but i'm not gonna say.pleez get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: yushiemie On: December 17, 2002 15:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is sooooo funny,but i bet i can guess who`s watching them,but i'm not gonna say.pleez get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 00:20 CST Comment/Review: Myst: Oh he's so cute. *hugs little Inu Yasha*
Trio: Ha ha he got turned into a little kid.
Myst: So did you trio. Remeber when you bothered hammy.
Trio: Grrr...
Myst: Anyway, please continue. This needs contiued. Kay. Thanx. |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:11 CST Comment/Review: YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE! THIS SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME! |
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