| "Little Inu Yasha" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: K005 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
hey who could the silver haird man be possibly inuyasha's dad sesshomaru who pls update
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Title: story ideas
Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru has flash backs from when Inu-yasha and Sesshoumaru were kids.
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Title: idea
Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
silver haired man ( sesshomaru ) could kidnap Inu-yasha and take care of him. or try and do sumthing to him they could ALL sit on the flowers then ALL get changed into kids. Great story sooo funny
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Reviewed By: Mekia On: August 24, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more please i have nothing to do now until school starts and i wanna read this fic |
Reviewed By: Demon Goddess On: July 17, 2003 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing wrong with it is the spelling.But other than that it is SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!! * Hugs chibi Inu-Yasha to chest till he can't breathe. |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 06, 2003 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuma:you need to work on your' grammar but other than that keep writing or else i shall become mad that i will ahh i'm talking like kenshin but that's not a bad thing but sesshy is sooooooooooo much better than him
sesshy:than who
inuma: than kenshin you dumbass
sesshy:what did you just call me
inuma: nothing keep writing your story bye (runs off while being chased by a rather angry sesshy) |
Reviewed By: Star Nymph On: June 19, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Please update soon! I can imagine Inu Yasha as a puppy! *_* SO CUUUUUUTE!!! |
Reviewed By: Brooke Roth On: June 05, 2003 11:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue the story. I think it is so funny^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: May 24, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story Pretty please write more cuz this is a cool fanfic |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGirl On: February 02, 2003 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Arale:AWWWW!!!!! Chibi Inuyasha is so cute!
Inuyasha: I ain't cute you baka!
Arale:(grabs his ear and tugs, making him yelp)
Quiet Inuyasha, you're almost as bad as Vegeta.
Inuyasha:Grr |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! You've got "the block" TOO!?!?!? *runs for the hills*
*peek over the snowcaps* Suggestions?? Um... are there going to be any pairings in this? Like Inu/Kag (butONLY if he gets big again!!!) OR...... *braces for the smack*.......Sess/Kag? *shrugs* I don't know. |
Reviewed By: Mekia On: January 19, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story please write more i to see more!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu On: December 21, 2002 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue, very funny |
Reviewed By: Shiari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyo... this is really cute so far... but I have a couple suggestions.
One... if your computer has a spell-chech you should use it...
Two... since some words are wrong, though spelled correctly, I suggest you get a beta-reader. That ways they can double check everything and suggest things that need improvement.
I beta for several people already... but I'm more than willing to go after your fic, if you wish it. |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
that is so Kawaii! i can totally imagine that! a chibi-inuyasha! aaaaaaaaaaw
*picks up Chibi Inuyasha and starts sqeezing him*
Soo adorable!
Keep on writing! i want to know what happens next! |
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