| "Our Love Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 105 ] |
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Reviewed By: 4evaobsessed(not loggedd in) On: October 17, 2004 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It is so creative and original. I hope you update soon even though I know what it feels like to update a story.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, love the story. I just started reading it and I finished in like two days. I noted in one of your authors notes that writing is a hobby and not a chore. I completly agree with you. I think you should take your time and have fun with your writing; don't do it just to make a bunch of people you don't know happy. Then again, that sounds kind of mean. Ha, I am rambling. Anyway, I like your character development and how you don't have them terribly out of character. I also love the fact that Inuyasha's gettin all jealous. God he is hot. Oh look at me, rambling again. hahaha. Anyway, keep up the great work, and I hope to hear from you soon, if not that's cool too. ^_^ Peace
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 14:39 PDT
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Sorry about before. I'm happy that you've updated and that things are going well with you. I wish Kagome would make up her mind...Nice job on the details and all the little things that make a great story. I look forward to the next chapter, jschu25
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 14:36 PDT
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:37 PDT
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Aieeeee! You've written a compelling story with a triangle that I can't stand! And I mean that in the nicest way possible. :) I personally am a huge inu-kag fan and the idea of either of those 2 with anyone else just doesn't fly with me. Besides that, it's so *not* cannon to have Sessh after kagome in anything other than the "die unworthy human friend/mate/whore of my half-breed brother" kind of way. Even with the way you're portraying the characters...it is so evident that Kagome and Inuyasha light each other on fire...that there's serious chemistry there. While Kagome might be the dutiful businesswoman who is devoted to her family, she is full of passion that can only be unleashed by Inu. And Inu is willing to change for her... The whole Kag-Sessh pairing is such a mismatch from the way you write it out. She *might* be able to coax him from his shell, but I think she'd be the one being shortchanged by his more reserved personality and workaholic attitude. None of this is an attack on your story...in fact, your terrific writing and thoughtful portrayal of the characters is what keeps me coming back for more -even though I want to bash my head into a wall when Kagome decides that she needs "more time" to make up her mind b/w Sessh and Inu. She should follow her *gut* her instincts...they clearly are telling her to get out of this arrangement, to be honest with Sessh and stop trying to mentally talk herself into something that's just not right for her. :) I've obviously got a |
Reviewed By: 4evaobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 07:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story update as soon as possible. You update faster on fanfiction.com though, and sometimes i can't get on that sight so i read it hear.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job! I am really into this story! I am just itching to find out who Kag ends up with. Keep up the good work! Please update soon
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 15:41 PDT
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I stumbled across this story, and I'm so glad I started reading it. I've often wondered who Kagome would choose if both brothers chased after her, and this story brings that ponderance to light. I've added this fic to my favorites.
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Title: I found you!
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found you after all these months! I started reading this on ID and was dissapointed when the site was no longer being updated. A few days ago, I went on a mad search for the stories tht were located there and handt been completed. Yous is now one of the few that hasnt been abandoned. Thank you so much for updating. This was one of my favorite storylines and I was heart broken when I found out that I may not see an end to it. Keep up the good work and remember this about the people who write mean things to get you to write something more....If you look under their profiles, most of the time you will find that their writing is garbage and they are most likely jealous at your talent and skill. Keep your chin up, its hard I know. Just take comfort in the fact that you are better than they are...and at writing as well. You should have listed the e-mail address of the person who wrote the horrible e-mail about you copying people. Your readers would have make sure it didnt happen again
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Title: *SMILES*
Reviewed By: SilverGirl37 On: July 16, 2004 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and cannot wait till you update. This is the first time I read any of your storys and can't wait to see what other storys you have on here. I know school can be stressful and since your probably out I hope you find time to update this story. Good luck!! ^-~
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! This story is awesome! I hope she goes with Inu! She can't be with sess, that would be wrong! Any wayz, update soon! Please!
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Reviewed By: rosie13 (not on) On: July 15, 2004 09:40 PDT
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Took a while, but its out!!! I'm so happy!! This is engrossing in every aspect, however frustrating. I personally think Kagome should end up with Sesshoumaru. Ah, theyre just meant for each other. In here, Inuyasha is just so... evil. Well, not evil, maybe menacing... Oh, I don't know. I just think Sesshoumaru is more 'fit for the job'. So to speak.
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 07:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great! I really like, and hope to continue reading it soon. Good luck with your job!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 14, 2004 21:01 PDT
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love this story so much! great job and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ruby youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:57 PDT
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love your story review now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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