| "A Saiyan Homecoming" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great. A little confusing but great. Maybe you could give time line references or a family tree of sorts to help. Wasn't Goku only suppose to be gone for 100 yrs., how many have passed? Exactly how old are each of the characters? Giving that info would lessen whatever confusion there might be with this story. I love it though. When will you update? I'm not really sure how being a beta-reader works, but if you give me an overview I'm willing to help.
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Reviewed By: nagake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fabulous fic and funny and funny and funny and dramatic i loved it! |
