| "Space Station Z" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 15:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaahhhh!!! I didn’t realize you updated! The last time I saw this was on ff.net! You should have told me! I was paying so much attention to A Cop Story! Lol
Great fic so far. I like how you’re just introducing characters and showing their personalities. I can’t wait until you expound on them more and introduce a little more conflict to get the ball rolling. I’m so excited for this fic. Hehehe, I have to admit I don’t ever want you to stop writing! ^_~
List of funnies
1. Nappa having gas
2. Marron not liking blonds
3. Yamcha having toilet troubles
4. Vegeta trying to count to 10
5. Vegeta attempt at analogy
~ Eevee (V'sM) |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo you posted. Funny stuff! I nearly fell over in my seat when Radditz made the frank comment about the aroma of his surroundings. Chaou-tzu actually procreated?!?! This is definately a first for me. I have my own ideas about what he and Tien do behind closed doors, but you've definately put a different twist on this fic. Kudos! Ranchi and Launch certainly make a dynamic duo. Lovely job! Until the next chapter. *^_^* |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I always miss the updates to the fics I like?
Anywho, great chapter.
Poor Yamcha..... stuck in the loo! lol
I wonder who just happened to leave a Banana Creme Pie out for Yamcha to find? Whoever it was, they are a bloody genius. lol
I loved the line about men doing their best thinking while on the throne. :)
Well, on to the next chapter to find out what has happened. I wonder if maybe they flew into a wormhole and was transported to another part of the galaxy. Again, great job! |
Reviewed By: W-chan (Too lazy to sign in) On: September 21, 2002 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor, Chi! Somebody find that girl a man quick! Awesome update! Even though Android 17 is a bit creepy, he has an aloof sort of sex appeal so kudos on the addition. Until the next update. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey RM! Welcome to mm.org! I really like this story and how you've personified everyone with heritage and stuff, even the bit about the Cold War was nice. You probably, or maybe not, know what I'm waiting for.... If you said Vegeta, you're right. Sorry, no prizes yet.... Anyways, continue this great story....
"True to the male species, he did some of his best work on the toilet." Really? Mine come in bed. No! Hentai! I mean, I get great story ideas when I'm sleeping! ^_~ No, my hentai dreams are not up for sell.... |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes! I really hope that nobody got hurt. Especially poor Yaumcha, because the last thing he needs right now is a blast in the toushie! ^_~ Keep em coming! |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, you didn't mention that. Thanks sweetie! ^_^ Fabulous job as usual, and I liked the hilarious bit about Chichi using her reverse backhand on Yaumcha. Ouch! Poor guy. I'm especially enjoying your unique take on Bulma and Marron's relationship. You’re the first person I've seen write a story with those two as sisters. They do have an uncanny likeness. Well, keep up the good work dahling. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: saki guzman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An explosion. I can tell that excitement's about to start^^ Glad to have you here at mediaminer anyway. Will be checking soon for chapter 3 (please don't take that long). |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start i can't wait to see how it turns out! UPDATE!
Ja 'Ne |
Reviewed By: JO On: September 13, 2002 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey RM! I loved it! Now, I'm just wondering
where that romance is!! You Promised!! Great
start and I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: cha On: September 12, 2002 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff!!! I like the direction and the plot so far, please update when you can.... |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Nice to see you here at MediaMiner. It seems like alot of Fanfiction authors ar jumping boat in light of the recent decision at FF.N. But, that isn't the point is it. :)
Anyway, I like how this fic has started out. An interesting premise. There is a plethora of things that can happen out in the vastness of space. I'm guessing that the crew run into the Saiyans in their travels? Maybe? *shrugs* Or maybe not, heck what do I know? :)
Oh, one more thing. Yamcha. :) I can honestly image him with his hair slicked back in a pony tail, chains hung around his neck, talking in an Italian accent, and thinking he is a natural born lady killer. O_o lol
I'll wrap this up by saying I cannot wait for the next installment of this. i hope it doesn't take too long. Not that I'm rushing you or anything... *pushes keyboard in your direction* :)
~**ssjprincess**~ |
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