| "Wishing Well" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 19:20 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! DON'T KILL THIS FIC!! I BEG YOU, WRITE MORE!! *sob*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o Dende-sama, i have been loking for this fic for about 2 years and now i have found it! i really engy this fic so write more!
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is the BEST Inuyasha and DBZ story I've ever read! It's funny, it's got great fight scenes and fluff. It's full of surprizes and it makes you want more. I'm glad that you are going to finish it. On a side note: I've read it 3 times now. It's that good! Ronna
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Reviewed By: Dragon_game On: October 08, 2003 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic. Write more please.
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeautyk On: October 04, 2003 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please please please! continue this story! >_
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Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 21, 2003 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story last year and u still haven't updated it ?!?!?!?! Please do it soon!!
Email me when u do!
silversaori@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: catarllsasami On: June 23, 2003 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brillient this is the best one I've read!!!You just have to write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: June 23, 2003 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROFL!! I love it!! I don't think I've ever laughed so hard!! I can't wait for more. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you pick this and your other stories up again soon. This is one of my favorites, and I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 22, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...and I had so much fun that I'm gonna read it again!
One suggestion: I think that having all three of the girls get pregnant at the same time would NOT be a good idea. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 21, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Too much segregation of the sexes; in this case it's out of character. If Inuyasha'd wanted warriors to come with him to survey the wolf lands, he'd have brought Sango too. Kagome is to some extent a girly girl, and he'd have insisted that she stay where she'd be safe (whether or not she'd obey is another matter) but we've seen many times that Inuyasha considers Sango to be a warrior more than he thinks of her as a girl.
I never did like stories that make Kouga out to be evil; if he's gotta get killed off, this was a very noble and well-characterized way to do it.
Oh, and again, fun! THIS was your first try? With skills like this, you deserve your own pants! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 21, 2003 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too many direct parallels. Inuyasha does something, then Gohan does the same thing, then Miroku does the same thing... Etc. Etc. It would be better if things were more subtle.
On the plus side, this is EXTREMELY fun to read! I know next to nothing about DBZ, and I'm still having a great time! |
Reviewed By: Mr_Vampire On: December 31, 2002 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is the very best crossover fic out there. The story is exclent from the first chapter I was hooked. I hope that u update soon. Your other story was exclent too. Again update as soon as u can I BEGG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done great with this so far!! I hadn't planned to leave a review until I had gotten to the end, but after reading this chapter, I just HAD to!! This chapter was amazing!! I didn't expect you to hook Miroku and Sango up, b/c of the way she acted toward him. But I should've known, since I've read your exclusive chapters to this. Guess I just forgot. You write very well, but there's still room for improvement. ^^ Nothing major, just sentence structure and word usage might need altering. And even that's not necessary. When you have such an amazing plot, who cares about any of that?! Great job! Can't wait to read more!! Expect more reviews! |
Reviewed By: Adidasfreak018@aol.com On: December 21, 2002 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic was great. I've been reading it for the past three hours. All I have to say is, Gohan may have "Sayian Instinct', but what ever happened to the pure hearted innocent boy from the show. Over all the only reason I began to loath your fanfiction was because it was for the lack of a better word loooooooong. I've been reading it since three in the morning. Its a wonder i can still type.Other wise your story was great but a little indecisive in a few areas. |
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