| "Wishing Well" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: catarllsasami On: June 23, 2003 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brillient this is the best one I've read!!!You just have to write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: June 23, 2003 00:13 CDT
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ROFL!! I love it!! I don't think I've ever laughed so hard!! I can't wait for more. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you pick this and your other stories up again soon. This is one of my favorites, and I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 22, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
...and I had so much fun that I'm gonna read it again!
One suggestion: I think that having all three of the girls get pregnant at the same time would NOT be a good idea. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 21, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... Too much segregation of the sexes; in this case it's out of character. If Inuyasha'd wanted warriors to come with him to survey the wolf lands, he'd have brought Sango too. Kagome is to some extent a girly girl, and he'd have insisted that she stay where she'd be safe (whether or not she'd obey is another matter) but we've seen many times that Inuyasha considers Sango to be a warrior more than he thinks of her as a girl.
I never did like stories that make Kouga out to be evil; if he's gotta get killed off, this was a very noble and well-characterized way to do it.
Oh, and again, fun! THIS was your first try? With skills like this, you deserve your own pants! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 21, 2003 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too many direct parallels. Inuyasha does something, then Gohan does the same thing, then Miroku does the same thing... Etc. Etc. It would be better if things were more subtle.
On the plus side, this is EXTREMELY fun to read! I know next to nothing about DBZ, and I'm still having a great time! |
Reviewed By: Mr_Vampire On: December 31, 2002 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is the very best crossover fic out there. The story is exclent from the first chapter I was hooked. I hope that u update soon. Your other story was exclent too. Again update as soon as u can I BEGG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done great with this so far!! I hadn't planned to leave a review until I had gotten to the end, but after reading this chapter, I just HAD to!! This chapter was amazing!! I didn't expect you to hook Miroku and Sango up, b/c of the way she acted toward him. But I should've known, since I've read your exclusive chapters to this. Guess I just forgot. You write very well, but there's still room for improvement. ^^ Nothing major, just sentence structure and word usage might need altering. And even that's not necessary. When you have such an amazing plot, who cares about any of that?! Great job! Can't wait to read more!! Expect more reviews! |
Reviewed By: Adidasfreak018@aol.com On: December 21, 2002 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic was great. I've been reading it for the past three hours. All I have to say is, Gohan may have "Sayian Instinct', but what ever happened to the pure hearted innocent boy from the show. Over all the only reason I began to loath your fanfiction was because it was for the lack of a better word loooooooong. I've been reading it since three in the morning. Its a wonder i can still type.Other wise your story was great but a little indecisive in a few areas. |
Reviewed By: godofstrange On: December 20, 2002 05:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write a sequal it was great |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 20:45 CST
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LOL i think i scared my family laughing so much at the last few chappys :D i really like this story.
PLZPLZPLZ update ASAP,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: micaela On: November 02, 2002 00:24 CST
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i'm so happy that ou are continuing to write this story. i was so sad when i thought that it was over. keep going your story rocks!! |
Reviewed By: hawkband1 On: October 31, 2002 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. i look forward to seeing this updated every time i come here. it's well written and exciting and one of the better crossover fics i've read. i hope you continue writing this, it just gets better and better |
Reviewed By: ~Ash-chan~ On: October 29, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooooooooo great!!!!! please write more soon!!
Ja-ne!!
~Ash-chan~ |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 19:50 CST
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sounds like a fun afternoon is planned
more!!! |
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