Reviewed By: nekochan614 On: September 18, 2002 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the plot is very good andis an interesting twist to both animes. the grammar could use some work, and you could really do to add some more detail to your chapters to flush them out a bit |
