| "Shinigami's Lover 2" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 12:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! You updated!!! i love your fics...i've also read your The Crossing Paths Arc and i love it. Good story |
Reviewed By: aatln On: November 09, 2002 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Kracken!!! Great story and well written; I can't wait for each part to be posted here. I didn't think the second part of the 'Shinigami Lover' series could be as good as the first part, but it is. I'm hooked. |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: November 08, 2002 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ssssssiiiiigghhhhhhhhhhh*.....this chapter is SOOOOOOOOO ANGSTTYYYYYY,....and not to mention SOOOOO SAAAAPYYYYY too,...i just love the ending part though,...when duo found heero sleeping in bed,...SOOOOOOOOOOO
SWEEEEETTTTTT,....*grins happily*....just the perfect sight for duo to see after such a crappy day,...and grange seems a lil less
hard on duo,...NOT much though,...just a tiny bity bit,...he still such a bastard towards our poor duo though,...*pout*...
AAAAAnnnnnyyyyyyWWWWaaaaaaayyyyy,...all in all,..another Grrreeaattttt chapter kracken-sama,...as usual of course,...*wink*....keep-up the good work kay,..till yer-next chapter,..JAAAAAAAAA and GAAANBBATEEEE-NEEEE!!!!!!^_~!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cherry Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....what a cute way to end a stressful fic. I'm glad Duo seems to be settling in (shower incident aside, he DID complete the training and managed to hold himself together reasonably well. If you get the job done, who cares if you collapse in the safety and comfort of your own home later?). And I'm glad you haven't made Grange a total bastard, because that would be too typical. It's a nicely complicated character wheel you've got set up here and that makes it all the more interesting to read.
Plus the writing is excellent, as always. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Cattu On: April 10, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shinigami's Lover 1 and 2 have to be my fav GW fanfic and i can't wait for the third installment ^_^ I don't think i'd ever get tired of gentle, loving Heero and crazy, bad assed Duo so please, please, please, please, please more SL 3 soon? before i get withdrawal symptoms!!!
can't think of anything else to say, you rock, keep writin' xXx |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it when they are cute and happy together. I enjoyed the way you went through Heero's and Duo's reactions to what had happened during the day and how they discussed everything afterward. It was a good look into what each was thinking and feeling. |
Reviewed By: Zharaya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, and this one in particular, but if you kill off that dog I'll take your friggin' head off. YOU WILL NOT KILL THAT DOG!!!!! I reeeeeeaaaaaaally like your stories. Fake is pretty hood too. Pleade write more soon. Arigato. |
Reviewed By: battousai On: October 30, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic alot! I even read the first fic it was so good. Continue the fic Kracken-Sama i need more!! YEAH!! |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly loved this chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
That was nice! I like how Duo is trying to prove himself but that so far he has been able to exert a decent measure of control over his reactions. It was interesting that we got to meet the commander in this chapter as well. Heero checking up on Duo is only what anyone would do! I'd want to know what was wrong with my other half as well. :) Thanks for writing! |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 26, 2002 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fine chapter. I wonder if the new commander will be there to support Duo or back up Grange after he reads Duo's file. Have to wait for you to further flesh out his character. Heero loves Duo so much, but he has to be careful not to be so overprotective that he smothers Duo. That could trainwreck both of their Preventer Careers and personal life. |
Reviewed By: Amika On: October 25, 2002 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you're continuing the Shinigami's Lover Arc! I just caught myself up in one seating. Your writing never ceases to amaze me! You're always prompt on your updates, and they're always wonderful! I can't wait for more! :D |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Review time again eh? well, as always, it was totally fabulous! your characters are so real, I keep expecting to run into them on the street somewhere. . .ok ok, an ally! |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 22, 2002 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I'm glad Duo was able to handle this first session with Grange. Something tells me that Grange might want to get rid of Soda so that he can in turn get rid of Duo. I'm sure that Duo will be able to handle it. He is far more stronger than he thinks he is. |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 22, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fanttastic chapter! Loved the lemon, it is so 1x2. I just have to admit that I enjoyed Duo's method of pest control. |
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