| "Shinigami's Lover 2" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cattu On: April 10, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shinigami's Lover 1 and 2 have to be my fav GW fanfic and i can't wait for the third installment ^_^ I don't think i'd ever get tired of gentle, loving Heero and crazy, bad assed Duo so please, please, please, please, please more SL 3 soon? before i get withdrawal symptoms!!!
can't think of anything else to say, you rock, keep writin' xXx |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it when they are cute and happy together. I enjoyed the way you went through Heero's and Duo's reactions to what had happened during the day and how they discussed everything afterward. It was a good look into what each was thinking and feeling. |
Reviewed By: Zharaya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, and this one in particular, but if you kill off that dog I'll take your friggin' head off. YOU WILL NOT KILL THAT DOG!!!!! I reeeeeeaaaaaaally like your stories. Fake is pretty hood too. Pleade write more soon. Arigato. |
Reviewed By: battousai On: October 30, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic alot! I even read the first fic it was so good. Continue the fic Kracken-Sama i need more!! YEAH!! |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly loved this chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 11:01 CST
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That was nice! I like how Duo is trying to prove himself but that so far he has been able to exert a decent measure of control over his reactions. It was interesting that we got to meet the commander in this chapter as well. Heero checking up on Duo is only what anyone would do! I'd want to know what was wrong with my other half as well. :) Thanks for writing! |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 26, 2002 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fine chapter. I wonder if the new commander will be there to support Duo or back up Grange after he reads Duo's file. Have to wait for you to further flesh out his character. Heero loves Duo so much, but he has to be careful not to be so overprotective that he smothers Duo. That could trainwreck both of their Preventer Careers and personal life. |
Reviewed By: Amika On: October 25, 2002 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you're continuing the Shinigami's Lover Arc! I just caught myself up in one seating. Your writing never ceases to amaze me! You're always prompt on your updates, and they're always wonderful! I can't wait for more! :D |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 17:37 CDT
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Review time again eh? well, as always, it was totally fabulous! your characters are so real, I keep expecting to run into them on the street somewhere. . .ok ok, an ally! |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 22, 2002 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I'm glad Duo was able to handle this first session with Grange. Something tells me that Grange might want to get rid of Soda so that he can in turn get rid of Duo. I'm sure that Duo will be able to handle it. He is far more stronger than he thinks he is. |
Reviewed By: Gossamer Wings On: October 22, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fanttastic chapter! Loved the lemon, it is so 1x2. I just have to admit that I enjoyed Duo's method of pest control. |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 16:00 CDT
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an excellant read, very gripping |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: October 13, 2002 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWHHHOOAAHHHHHHH,...that is quite a scene there,...i never imagine killing a rat can be Soooo,...Errr,...quite an adventure??,...*snicker*...and at 3;00 in the morning too,...*snicker somemore*..heero is deffinately NOT a morning person,...*grins*...poor baby,...got quite a fright there,...and end-up hanging side-by-side with duo,...at 3;00 in the morning too boot,...*LOL*....
at least mr hullit're willing to help them and maybe teach them how to keep a home clean,...*tsk,tsk*...all in all,...another GREAAATTTTT chapter yer-got here kracken-sama,...*wink*...keep-up the good work,...and continue soon kay,...*hugs and kisses*...till next chapter,...JAAAAAAAAA and GAAAANBBBAATEEE-NEEEE!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad Mr. Hulitt is back. It's cool how they don't know what they should be doing, considering they ARE guys and all without previous home experience. An edgy Heero is interesting as well. |
Reviewed By: Arashi Lioncourt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your development is awesome! How could Sally do that, especially w/someone like Duo? It seems she is the one who needs to work on doing her job better. She's obviously harboring some dangerous misconceptions and it will be her fault if anyone gets hurt in such a way again. |
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