| "Training Skills" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: blu bebs On: October 20, 2002 23:59 CDT
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you updated!! yeay! can't wait for the next chapter. you did promise you'll try to post faster. i'll hold on to that promise!^____^ |
Reviewed By: *Twiggy* On: October 18, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Rain, it's me! Were talking right now LOL! I love your story doll! You are super great!!! |
Reviewed By: tnn On: October 13, 2002 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Phwee, I've really enjoyed this fic thus far. It's gone from adicic to angsty and sad to sweet. ^^ I hope that you continue it... just don't make it too utterly mushy where it rots all of our (the readers) teeth out? I mean, sure, it's meant to be romantic, but they're guys, and, well... I guess that sums that up, pretty much. *sweatdrop*
What can I say? Most men have stunted emotions and are limited to a few basic drives. I'm not trying to be rude or pregidous against guys, but all of the ones I have met so far are like that... -_- It is a sad, sad world.
Btw... I have a question. Why won't Squall eat cheese/butter? *is confoozled* It must have to do with the vegetarian thing, but since I don't know any vegeterians personally, I don't understand the importance of not ingesting dairy products.
Andyhow, that's it for now. I hope I didn't rub off as too stupid... |
Reviewed By: Instructor Quistis On: October 09, 2002 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again! I'm still llovin this. I'm just biding my time before they close down the smut on FFnet. Oh well. not much I can do. But As soon as I ger started on that story, witch will be soonk, I promise, I'll let ya know |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel On: October 09, 2002 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this chapter was cool. I like how Seifer is trying so hard to get Squall back but there's gotta be something else in there, where he really gets his trust. I don't know, but I can't wait for the next chapter. I also like how you talked about their lives at Garden. That was a nice touch. Oh, Seifer gonna get him!!!!
Can't wait! Can't wait!! |
Reviewed By: Pickle in a jar! On: October 14, 2002 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Baby, you never fail to impress me! I loved this chapter, things are starting to get a little more even out there! Mistress has been fighting tooth and nail on FF.N (she won't stop until she wins, so they WILL have to crack, she could do bad things if they didn't)
Once again, you have a perfect 10 from me (you always will) and I hope to see another chapter out soon. Love you will all my heart beutiful!
hugs and kisses!
Pickle in a jar! |
Reviewed By: Ayesha On: October 08, 2002 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! I also hope that you write more soon, I DO want to see Squall and Seifer happy. |
Reviewed By: harmonian priestess On: October 08, 2002 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaand another wonderful chapter!!! your fic is soooooo great, can just repeat it every time!
they`re just a great couple and so sweet!!! can`t wait for the next chapter.^-^ |
Reviewed By: Ashi Taiyouno On: October 07, 2002 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gomen, Gomen! I'm sorry I didn't review last chapter! Work and school and such...but I caught up with both chapters tonight! I'm so happy that Squall and Seifer are getting back together...It's wonderful watching two people fall in love all over again! *giggle* ~_^ Keep it up, can't wait for the next one!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Aequanoctis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute, cute chappy. Seifer doesn't seem to stop getting nicer lol
FF.net is definitely not going to put back the NC-17 stories, even with the petition. Their last update was October 5th and they said the removal of remaining NC-17 fics was going to be October 12th. Soooo basically they don't care about the 25 000 something signatures of members and visitors. They don't care about their people at all anyway. I wish ff.net was a person so I could choke him/her to death *grumbles*
eh sorry I got a lil bit angry here ;) anyway this fic is just great. Final point. |
Reviewed By: Instructor Quistis On: October 06, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really glad that even though you aren't updatin g your fanfiction.net stuff you still write. I'll have to get cracking on my present to you. |
Reviewed By: Crystal On: October 04, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Ive read some Squall and Seifer fan fic before but this one takes the cake. This is beyond brilliant. I laughed, I cried, i cringed, I gasped. WOW! I feel FF.Net has a right to put whatever stories they want up on their site. But I still enjoyed this one. I would reread it again, but I already feel to dirty. |
Reviewed By: blu bebs On: October 07, 2002 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yey! i found your fic at last!!^_^ please continue soon!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 15:49 CDT
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I can't wait for the next part! I'd write more, but its dinner time!
-Pluto |
Reviewed By: shrewlaura On: September 27, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaah! Rain! *glomp* Did ya miss me? So speaking of how much fanfiction.net sucks they really suck. It was just so easy!! Any fic you could want on just one webpage. But I'd rather go out and find stories then not read at all. I wanted to keep reviewing the chapters of your story on ffn though. Ah well, life goes on. |
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