| "I Deserve" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Catlin On: September 17, 2002 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to keep reviewing your work but I have just finished reading chapter 1 - 3. Very sad story and I like the way you put it across. Pleas dont keep me waiting for the next, I want to see how Aya and Yohjis relationship builds from this and how it will affect Ken. As for the mother, I am not impressed, she knew what was happening and she still let it happen and now she cries. Too late for me Im afraid.
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Catlin On: September 15, 2002 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I have yet to read the second chapter, but I have to go. You have flexible style of writing. I like that. Very different from your black lace, silk and leather story. I also love Aya/Yohji pairing.
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles On: January 18, 2003 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is wonderful. I don't really review fics i like very often because i think 'hey other people will read it and like it and review it so why waste the energy?' i am making an exception with you because i am just dying to see the next part to your story! i love your fic soooo soooo much and i am always checking FF.Net or Mediminer to see if you've written another chapter installment or not and well you haven't! hu hu hu hu hu hu hu hu *cries and looks pleadingly* ;P. No but seriously i like your fic very much, its very angsty and i like the inner turmoil Yohji is going through and the way he's confused by Aya's sudden affections. Dunno why but i like AyaxYohji more than YohjixAya...anyway just keep up the good writing and i hope you update soon. pretty please? :)! |
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