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Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 11:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
When I get a writers block what I usually do is I pull out a list of my fave authors and read through their stuff hoping to get some inspiration...
You are no exception ^_^ very angsty, very sad but very well written. Youve given me ideas for my own story ^_~
And please dont keep us waiting to long for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: March 04, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been hooked on this fic since the very beginning! I LOVE IT (though I love ALL of your fics!)! Ya are doing a wonderful job with the characters and their emotions! Poor Yohji! But it is great!
I was confused a little with Chapter 6 (What Now?). Yohji was lying on the floor, so when Aya showed up, how did Yohji back his back into a wall? The description was kinda confusing...as well as why there was a mirror in that place (Missions Chapter 5). Those were the only two things that kinda confused me. Other than that, I'm in love with this fic!
I'm constantly checking for the next update. Please keep writing and don't keep us in suspense for too long! |
Reviewed By: Lina On: February 09, 2003 12:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Welcome back!!! |
Reviewed By: Sylph On: February 09, 2003 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Happy you updated. Hope life is a bit better for you now. A wonderful chapter as usual. Can't wait for the final chapter. |
Reviewed By: LINA On: January 31, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, God!!! Where are You?!!! |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happens to Yohji? Will Aya and the others save him? Is it too late to save him? What will happen? Please please go on with this fic! I have to know what happens! |
Reviewed By: Catlin On: November 17, 2002 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey there Shae
just wanted to say that i luv the way the story is going and the romance between aya and yohji is done nice and slowly even with a confused yohji who is having trouble saying i luv u. pleas pleas post the next chapter soon because you left with a cliffhangar, dang it all, anyway good job shae and thanks.
catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shaeric, this was fantastic. I loved it to no end. Finally Yohji and Aya are getting together and Fate once again throws them into a loop by having Yohji abducted. What will happen next? Will the drug push to commit suicide or will Aya say our Yotan? Hurry with the next installent. Great job, Shaeric!!
Forsaken |
Reviewed By: poutpout On: December 18, 2002 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continu, i really like your story ^_^
arigatou!!! |
Reviewed By: Indyra Paganini On: September 29, 2002 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed Black lace, leather...oh dear, can't get the title right, but I did like it a lot. But this fic is really different and I like how tender yet possessive Aya is towards Youji, which is what makes this pairing sooo good. The story is good, I like how Ken is festering in his jealousy and I hope he doesn't get too carried away by it. Aya and Youji deserve each other. Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: BNA On: September 29, 2002 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just love your romantic stories with Yotan & Ayan! I hope you won't forget the lemon... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 11:17 CDT
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This is a very moving story. Although Ken is a little villainous in this (re: selfish), I don't mind so much because I enjoy Youji & Aya stories.
Hopefully the next part will be out soon? |
Reviewed By: Catlin On: September 17, 2002 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to keep reviewing your work but I have just finished reading chapter 1 - 3. Very sad story and I like the way you put it across. Pleas dont keep me waiting for the next, I want to see how Aya and Yohjis relationship builds from this and how it will affect Ken. As for the mother, I am not impressed, she knew what was happening and she still let it happen and now she cries. Too late for me Im afraid.
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Catlin On: September 15, 2002 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I have yet to read the second chapter, but I have to go. You have flexible style of writing. I like that. Very different from your black lace, silk and leather story. I also love Aya/Yohji pairing.
Catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles On: January 18, 2003 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is wonderful. I don't really review fics i like very often because i think 'hey other people will read it and like it and review it so why waste the energy?' i am making an exception with you because i am just dying to see the next part to your story! i love your fic soooo soooo much and i am always checking FF.Net or Mediminer to see if you've written another chapter installment or not and well you haven't! hu hu hu hu hu hu hu hu *cries and looks pleadingly* ;P. No but seriously i like your fic very much, its very angsty and i like the inner turmoil Yohji is going through and the way he's confused by Aya's sudden affections. Dunno why but i like AyaxYohji more than YohjixAya...anyway just keep up the good writing and i hope you update soon. pretty please? :)! |
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