| "Blood Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: otaku On: July 03, 2003 04:41 CDT
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Go Kakarott,make him yours!!! Claim Vegeta again and again!!!! OOOpppss!!! Sorry I coudn't contain myself! Anyway nice part,it's just gets better and better! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 23:28 CDT
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Yay Goku! Yaaay! *turns around in circles 'till she falls down* Yay!
*eagerly awaits next chapter* |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 23:11 CDT
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Gah! Feel the wrath of the evil cliffy!!
That is so rude you know :P Twit...
Do I sense a lemon, or at least some sour flavoring next chapter? Oh goodness I hope so ^_^ *feels like a shameless perv*
hehe
keep up the grand work!
*impatiently waiting for the next chapter* |
Reviewed By: Sara On: July 02, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story and am very glad you started updating again. Don't make me wait too long for the next chapter :-) |
Reviewed By: otaku On: July 01, 2003 05:13 CDT
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What happened to Veggie's tail?? Is he pregnant with Kakarott's child???AGHHH,I must know and only you can tell!!! Please update ASAP!!!! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 16:24 CDT
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this is pretty good, i hope you don't take too long to update... i just started reading it though--so i really have no idea how long that last update was... -_-0 i understand completely how life is a neusance though--bleah! but, continue soon--i wanna see what happens! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:07 CDT
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*waits with baited breath for the next chapter* What's the red fur mean? I need to knooow! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 14:13 CDT
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I really liked this chapter...Vegeta turned the tables...Hahahahahaha!!!!
Looks like they both got what they wanted...*hentai smirk*!!!
Goku didn't care...whatever, it took to have Vegeta's touch...he'd gladly do...(except for that one breif moment} Once Vegeta realized Kakarott was relinquishing dominance...he was all over him....hahaha!!!
A very *tasty* lemon...one they both will remember...
I also like the way you write their different perspectives...you can feel that they belong together...who knows maybe Vegeta will want to share the dominate position...*wink*...
Thanks for the E-mail. If you have a mailing list please add me to it, as I wouldn't want to miss anything...hahahaha! Thanks...
VERY NICE...I THROUGHLY ENJOYED IT...!!!!
wAITING....................................................................................................................................................................................................... |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 20:26 CST
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*fully agrees w/ SaintMe and thinks u should continue this* |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 21:17 CST
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aww man! why'd you have to go and end it like that? you HAVE to update!! pretty please? *puppy dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: G-jin On: October 09, 2002 16:55 CDT
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Great story! Please write more! I want to read more! Continue! Please! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 04:17 CDT
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I've had this fic on my fanfiction.net-favourites list just about FOREVER! Are you going to continue? I've been waiting SO long... |
Reviewed By: White Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 16:05 CDT
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That was a really good start. I'm putting it on my fav's. update soon! I love Vegita and Goku, I also love Vegita and Gohan and Gohan and Trunks. I better stop before I fill the whole page with couples I like... ^_^() |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
slow start? did you see a slow start? I didn't see a slow start. . . .I saw every thing in 10/20 vision with surround sound. . . .I wonder when chapter two is going to pop out of thin air. . . .??? |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2002 18:57 CDT
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I read this on FF. Snice Xing removed NC17 I read those stories here now. So update soon.
Waiting............. |
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