| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 21, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: *gasp* No! No! I _NEED_ the fluff! There is no need for apology! Fluff, fluff, fluff! The fluff is needed! Vital! Fluffiness is the way! *rants on and on*
SilentDarkness: *sighs and shakes head* It seems the last chapter was a bit of an emotional trauma for my aibou. And, according to her, the healings for any emotional trauma is-
BleedingAngel: Fluff! ^-^
SilentDarkness: *chuckles* yes, yes.
BleedingAngel: *smile* Simply to inform you, the elabortaions of pure emotion you redeem in your writing is something for Ra to behold! Each feeling of anger; filth the crawls atop the surface. Splendid. Absolutely splendid ^_^
SilentDarkness: *nod* Indeed.
BleedingAngel: The tenderness you've labled as "mushiness" fits the tenor of this particular situation perfectly! I'm sure you haven't upset anyone! I've realized many individuals out there are sheer angsty vultures. Don't become pressured by them, ne? And remember: Fluffiness is the cure! *holds up a picket sign* ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ITSAME On: November 21, 2002 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! Grrr!!! Stupid fanfiction.net! Ah, well...at least we have wonderful mediaminor.org! ^______^ I already reviewed your fic before ff.net took it off, but I wanted to add something. This story seems so real to me. I feel like I'm watching a movie at the very least. These are my favorite lines out of the whole fic.
"Yami?" he asked through the tears and gasps.
"Yes?"
"Do you...do you love me?"
"I will always love you, little Yugi."
And that was what hurt worst of all.
Very well written fic. I commend you on your excellent writing skills. ^____^ WAH! I'M CRYING NOW AFTER READING THOSE LINES!!! ;____; |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh crap Oh crap oh crap! that was pretty dang good! No more though, I would of liked it better as a One Shot! |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: November 20, 2002 09:24 CST
Comment/Review:
...i'm glad that they're on speaking terms again...but still!
tamera: what she's trying to say is that she hopes that they get back together VERY VERY soon...
...umm...yeah, that's right. please please update soon!! i can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: AMG On: November 20, 2002 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAWAAAAIII!! Sad too. Poor Yuugi-chan. =( I hope it's happy soon! I hope you bring next chappy really, really soon I wanna read!!! ^_^ SOOOON! Congratulations on your relationship. =D PLEASE UPDATE! ^___________^
(Y+Y4EVER!) |
Reviewed By: lee On: November 19, 2002 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. More soon, please? |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: *crying* How could *hiccup* Yami *coughs stuffily* do that to his *hiccup* light? *hugs her Yami*
SilentDarkness: shhh... there, there, aibou. *hugs her back, swaying a bit*
BleedingAngel: *sniffs* I know, but it's so realistic. I will admit that I was looking forward to this chapter. But I didn't expect it to be so heart-breaking! *sob*
SilentDarkness: I know, I know. *rubs her back soothingly*
BleedingAngel: I loved this! Truthfully! The descriptions of raw feeling on Yugi's part was absolutely beautiful! And THAT is exactly what pains me so! *conjested cough*
SilentDarkness: Aibou... you seem ill.
BleedingAngel: I'll feel better once chapter seven is posted, all emotional stress is sorted out, and YamiYugi comes to his senses! *sniffle*
SilentDarkness: That's not what I meant, you. Get into bed. And no more crying, aibou. It hurts me so.
>font color="red">BleedingAngel: *hiccup* okay... Please write the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: MetsukaiRogue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 on everything darling!! Its absolutly wonderful!! Your style of writing is simply intriguing, and i cant wait to see what you come up with next. Yum Yummy bishounen!
Ta ta! |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
oh man...that was sad!!! please...go on...it's sad to leave it at that!! go on...PLEASE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: November 14, 2002 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue the story and pleez nicer to little Yugi? *Yugi glares eviliy*
Ahem, to Yugi I mean. *apologizes to Yugi* |
Reviewed By: Djehuti [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOooooOOOOoooOOOOoo!!!! PUH-leeease don't end it there! More more more more! Angst is good, but so is happy lemony fresh goodness! I felt so bad for Yugi in this chapter..poor guy...he did it too soon and wasn't ready *sniffle* I am really liking this fic! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 14, 2002 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! How could you do that to Yugi-chan??! *cries* *sob* *sob* YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! ^_^ Why is Yugi hurting?!!?? Why!?? Please write more happy chappies soooooooooooooooooooooooon! ^_^ SOON SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARIGATO!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 13, 2002 07:45 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good, please continue, I hate stories that end sad. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 13, 2002 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm....This is a very unique outlook. I've never run across a lemon like this chapter. It's very deep. It seems to me that Yugi was unhappy/hurt because the reasons for his consent leaned more toward "I want to become and adult, I am not a child" than "I want Yami to be happy." Very interesting! If not.....ummm.....pleasing to the reader..... o.0;; |
Reviewed By: holo On: November 12, 2002 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL! I dont want to send any flamers but Im very confused *-* The chapter looks though as if Yugi was being rapt or something. I thought it was a happy lemon? Oh well, write the next chapter soon! |
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