| "That Kind of Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSquirrel On: August 11, 2006 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waaaaaah, don't say this story is abandoned! Come back and bring more naked Aya with you!
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Reviewed By: Inori_Sakura On: December 31, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KAWAII! you hentai! XD i love it! just love it! you rule! you just.. you rock! dammit, you write wounderful PWP smut.. but if it was up to me, i would always have Yohji fucking Aya in uncomfortable places.. *hint hint* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I need my bishies... Aishetru! Ja ne tomodachi!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 21:15 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe in the elevator...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
poor omi hes traumitized
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
eep caught on the table
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:53 CST
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i dont even watch this show lol but i like the stories n i like urs!
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Reviewed By: Skyeshadow On: February 28, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree. Aya-kun's already ooc, let him shock Youji just a bit. Also, I like the series, all PWP, though I think I see the beginnings of a plot coming. At any rate, continue soon. |
Reviewed By: L-990 On: February 24, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please.idea:rasberrys and choclate with wripped cream. |
Reviewed By: L-990 On: February 24, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please.idea:rasberrys and choclate with wripped cream. |
Reviewed By: L-990 On: February 24, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please.idea:rasberrys and choclate with wripped cream. |
Reviewed By: L-990 On: February 24, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please.idea:rasberrys and choclate with wripped cream. |
Reviewed By: Saz On: March 02, 2003 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I love this fic! AyaxYohji PWP! There is a God!! Thank you! But you have got to write more! With whipped cream! Mmmmmm... Aya covered in whipped cream. *drool* My hentai mind is going in overload now. Must... find... more... AyaxYohji... PWPs. *drool* |
Reviewed By: L-990 On: February 24, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please.idea:rasberrys and choclate with wripped cream. |
Reviewed By: Shadow On: January 31, 2003 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was great! u need a creative idea? Whip cream, strawberries and chocolate syrup in the living room. Kan and Omi are out grocery shopping. hehehe i can be sooooooooo evil. You need to finish this story so i can read more K? k. |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 12:44 CST
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You NEVER need an excuse for yummy smut! XD Wonderful things like that happen on their own circumstances. Write more, ne?
kami-chan |
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