| "BodyHeat" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ashna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yay I found it! T____T Finally back to all my fave digifics!
*sigh*
hard to remember to come here.
Anyways great chapter! Awsome chapter!
More please and thank you!
Ashna |
Reviewed By: Samara On: October 28, 2002 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this ending *much* better. It shows the level Daisuke's sense of responsibility and the level of Ken's repression/shyness. Very well done. |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't say I'm not disappointed that the off-screen steamy bits were rewritten out of the fic, but truthfully, you've given yourself a lot more plot-wise to work with. You're going to post another chapter soon, right? I was all excited that you'd revised, but then I saw it was just a revision. (Which was really good!) Now Ken and Dai have to not only work through how Ken knew all that stuff but of their decision to not indulge their desires in the light of day that morning. Also, I'd like to know a little bit more about Daisuke's past. More likely than not, he's got a painful story back there that makes him want to help so much now. Post a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: PenPen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 13:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geez....Takes you so long to update. Great fic, but all that wait, I almost forgot about this fic. |
Reviewed By: Sucidal Bob On: October 18, 2002 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ratings? You give ratings on this site? Blood-y hell!
Anyway, after that little shock! WOO HOO! Ken and Daisuke in a shower!
Dai: What is it with you and showers anyway?
*shrug* Dont know, I just like them... and after writing a certain part of a certain story, I started finding them a lot more... fun *Kaiser grin*
Dai: *shudder* You've gotta stop doing that. Just say what you think about the fic
Ok. This fic is so cool! I love it! I want so, so much more! I want... I want... Hell! I wanna be Ken/Daisuke just so I could join in!
Dai: You're really just a sick and twisted bastard really aren't you.
*grin* Got it in one Dai chan |
Reviewed By: Moonlit Eyes1x2x1 On: October 18, 2002 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grr....damn you! Stop writing these awesome fics and taking FOREVER to update them! They so great! I need more! Ack! Oh! Wanna know something? Even time I read this, I picture Dai singing that No Doubt song to Ken. You know that one that goes, "You're really lovely (Underneath it all), You want to love me (Underneath it all), I'm really lucky (Underneath it all), You're really lovely..." yadda yadda yadda, y'know if y'read the lyrics to it, they really go with this story. Anywayz, I'm gonna go to Kensuke Central and look up that first fic of yours I read cause I'm bored. Ja! |
Reviewed By: wormmonsoulonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evilll!!!!!!!!!! Is THIS how you planned to end chapter 9?!!!!! Double evil! Oh, it gets more and more intriguing as the story develops.. There is practically no release! ^_^ I liked the dialogues, a lot of them, but good! How can they joke at a time like this! *indigant muttering* I can never get my fics so intense... F***!
I love you. |
Reviewed By: yami_no_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic rules! Very well written and interesting! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: belladonna fait On: September 29, 2002 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god Sugah! you did it again! its beautiful. im so in love with this fic.
Hoep teh next chappie comes soon.
lots of love
bella |
Reviewed By: BloodyErszebeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With all the ffn problem, I gave up all hope to read the nineth chapter and Oh My God, here it is ! And I LOVE the shower cliffanger...I really look foreward the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Skeyeta On: September 28, 2002 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few minor grammar mistakes, nothing major and easily overlooked. But overall your story is wonderful. Love the way you are portraying your characters. Put simply, your story is addicting! Patiently (or not so patiently) waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Sugah [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 09:35 CDT
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I've usually put up a lil thing in the profile if it's updated on another page for right now...heheeh |
Reviewed By: babydragon On: September 27, 2002 06:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i dunno if you remember me? i read this on ff.net before...
and i still like it, very much.^^ it's one of my favorite fics... and its a pity about ff.net's NC-17 ban, its really a shame. when i think of all the amazing fics {like this} that we'll be losing...arghs...::feels frustrated::
anyway, whatever happens, i still hope you finish this fic! ::huggles fic:: coz i love it. {and can you put a note up on ff.net when you update it? much appreaciated}
love this! ^^ |
Reviewed By: wormmonsoulonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 08:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
The third chapter and the third review.
*giggle in her fist, murmur* Brilliant. Uhhhh.. kissing... uhhh.. Kaiser... oh, Ken! *apologising puppy look* Yeah, you know, we know, everyone know - you make them super sexy, super sweet, super sugah..
Did I tell you, enjoyment factor is absolutely HUNDRED OUT OF TEN! |
Reviewed By: wormmonsoulonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 08:35 CDT
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oh, it's so nice of you to warn us, immature readers about the whole sex thing.. *ironical* We've learnt from you. *sees the author's opinion on self shoot up in the sky* HEEELOOO! Yep, I'm going to review every chapter.
I love your descriptions here, and your pics of Ken are cool. Inspiring. Maybe I'd do some too. Maybe. |
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