| "Watch me Shine" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cresentlady On: April 03, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! please, i beg of you! WRITE MORE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Lord Obsidian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 01:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say thet I truely enjoyed your story and can only hope you post more soon. As for Flamers, I have found that 90% (Read as flamers) of humanity should be thrown back to the sludge they de-evolved from, but the other 10% (Read as decent people) give one hope for the future. (I'm sorry about the spelling, but I cant realy help it. It's a nuralogical problem and no one else is awake to profread.) |
Reviewed By: Crystal_Kitty2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would have rated everything over 100 but they don't let me, i love this story... ^_^ update soon, cuz i'll be waiting *_* (starry-eyed) i can just cry T_T im jumping for joy that im getting dizzy @_@ thats how much i like this story!! |
Reviewed By: janna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 05:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi
i like your stories a lot,
because how your write usgai ,i just so tired
of the whinning ,crybaby ,i mean even when she
is adult. i never like rinni ,all she ever
did was treated serna liked crap,thou in the
maga she treated bunny better,
i love betryl stories when usgai and mamour
stay together ,
your stories are very good,ps. put poor
mamour of his misery and let him make love
to usgai and have hankra away[just so usgai and
mamour can have the night,i do like hankra
ps,i cannot spell
hope you upate soon
thank you
janna |
Reviewed By: crissy On: February 10, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe that this is one of the best stories i have read in a while. as one of the other reviewer said this is a breath of fresh air. you are doing an amazing job with this story and i hope that you come out with the next chapter soon.
Who ever is tellin you all that s**t dont lison or believe it, it is a load of bull. |
Reviewed By: justdie On: February 11, 2003 07:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your writing style!Please keep it comming. (btw my boyfriend, who only tolorates Sailor Moon because of an intense love for me, truely enjoyed Runaway Trian) |
Reviewed By: ChibiKoneko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I don't know why some people even bother reviewing if it's gonna be some dumb flame. People are givin you crap about how the story SHOULD be....well HELLO, if all the stories were EXACTLY the same, It'd be boring as hell! So congrats to you Serenitatis, I think this story is VERY well written, and I can't wait until the next update.
PEACE!! |
Reviewed By: cresentlady On: January 30, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please write more! i was very upset when i could no longer read your story on Aria. thank you for writting me back and telling me were to find it! i dont care what those other people say! please dont punish your faithful readers! and dont change a thing! oh and lots of compliments to your friend who keeps supporting your story through it all.
thanks cresentlady |
Reviewed By: sere On: January 23, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic and specially the way Serena turn out to be. PLEASE keep on writing, I can wait for the next chapters... |
Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess On: January 19, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read nothing but crap with the same hasbeen plot with the same hasbeen attitudes of characters, this however, this is art, this is a breath of freash air amongst the garbage that is known being normal Sailor Moon plot. I am very impressed, many have tried the "Usagi gets a back bone some of the senshi betray her she becomes more regal" but failed, you read two of those stories by two different authors and you'll find its almost exactly the same, and as for Chibi Usa, I hate her so its nice to see someone with the same passion for hating her. The trials is very original but I found the answer to the question that Hotaru asked to be to perdictable, but it shows that Usagi has depth and has considered this question before. As for the guardian of a trial I think it would be somewhat of a twist to have Chibi Chibi be one (just a suggestion not really needing to be followed). |
Reviewed By: wabooc [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I love the story it's very unique. Keep writing. I never liked Chibi- Usa either. You're a great author, kudos to you. Please continue the story for all of us who can't stop reading your story. |
Reviewed By: Eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovew the story line. Keep up the GREAT job. Please finish this. Can't wait to see what happens.
ebcar2k@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: YingRui On: January 17, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic! I reviewd on FF.net too by the way^^. I've rated everything ten because I love your style of writing. So far, I haven't read a single fanfic with an idea as creative and original as yours. Your fanfic is also very enjoyable, and I do not know why anyone would not like this fanfic. Thank you soooooo much for bringing such enjoyable reading to all Sailor Moon fans, and I read your note. I agree 100% with you. If someone doesn't like it, then they might as well not read it or flame it unless they have suggestions to improve someone's fanfic. Okay, this review is REALLY long! |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 16, 2003 12:13 CST
Comment/Review:
your fic is great.
I love your usagi and salor outler, particularly haruka *____*
it's very fun when she's go to kick somebody ass ^______________^
I don't like mamoru (I prefere seiya) but your mamoru is one the best mamoru I read on fiction *____*
please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Star On: November 18, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this!! It is awesome. Please continue!! |
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