| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Title: Yay! update =D
Reviewed By: Rizzle2k06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, this is the first FF7 fic i've read, mainly because i was a bit baffled by the pairing *i mean c'mon,he kills her in the game,so i was wondering how a paring like this would work out =P*.but i have to say i'm glad i took he time to read it,i was hooked on the storyline almost instantly, and its interesting to see how the SxA relationship develops *especially Sephi rolling down the hill (>_
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Title: Kepp on Burnin'!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 00:12 EST
Comment/Review:
Well now...this was quite a wonderful surprise. I was browsing mm.org before I got to my e-mail, and oh my! An Update? Oh my! And now that I have read this new chapter...I can definitely say that you still "got it". Despite the space of time between this chapter and the last, eveything rolls over smoothly, you don't skip a beat! I found this chapter to be an interesting development for the growing romance between everyone's favorite least-expected-couple. Besides showing how things are progressing as far as lovers go, did I sense the groundwork for some serious conversations between Sephy and Aeris in the near future? Anyways, this chapter has been nothing short of amazing, keep it up! I said I'd see it through, and I intend to keep that promise. Cheers and God bless! ~ forechunkukee
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Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 00:50 EST
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im sooo glad youre back!! i love the way this story isgoing althoughi do have one question... will this be entirely canon? the rolling down a mountain when he figusres out hes in love priceless. i laughed so hard i was crying. please dont leave us hanging agian!! love your work hope to see much more. thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: October 07, 2006 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!!! An update!! I knew you would do it eventually XD I LOVED the chapter by the way! Nice and interesting with not too much lovey dovey ^.~ Good luck with the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally finished reading what you have up! It has me burning for more. I hope you have time to update again fairly soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 13:43 EDT
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I just made it to chapter twenty-one! I should of left a reveiw for every chapter read but I'm grounded and sneaking on at the moment>.< This story is so awsome it's fun to think of Aeris doing all this during the game. Which I've started to replay. I'm almost at the part where Aeris dies...I always cry. She's my favorite character. I can't wait to read about that though. Will he acually kill her? I love this story it is so interesting and you've captured the characters greatly. Well I'm done You'll get another reveiw when I finish reading^_^
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Reviewed By: l2achel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed it...Waiting for the next part. I think the best parts is were Aeris is like a deer trapped in head lights stage with Sephiroth.
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Title: Insanity
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 01:54 EST
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My initial thoughts upon reading this story: This guy must be insane! Sephiroth and Aeris?!? Well, my tune's changed quite a bit since then. Upon completing the 25th chapter, something struck me. This is one hell of a good write. In all honesty, this is one of those pieces out there that makes mm.org look good. Your stlye is awesome, conveying everything that needs to be said in a simple manner. Your spelling/grammar is tight, and the few mistakes that occur here and there aren't much of a big deal. It took some time getting used to the whole Sephiroth/Aeris idea, but once that passed, I realized that you made this story something that most authors can only hope their work becomes: believeable. Staying completely within the bounds of the FFVII universe, you've created something that in my opinion can totally happen. This is superb work work, keep it up. The only real complaint I have are the infrequent grammar/spelling mistakes that pop up here and there. Seriously, that's it. Update soon! I know life happens and delays come up, but seeing another update soon would be sweet. I'll be following this until you finish it. Peace , and keep it up! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Vega Lyrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... SO... FRIGGIN'... CUTE! I'm so glad you've updated, sweetie!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 12, 2006 15:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD that was funny/wierd and awkward o_O he's such a pansy, can't just spit it out can he
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: November 12, 2005 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya, still waiting for chappy 25, hope you post it some time soon, its been ages since the last update o_O
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Reviewed By: ZeldaFalcon On: July 31, 2005 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has been a very enjoyable fic to read. Hopefully you will have time to finish it, what with being out of school and all. If you've got time, drop me a line when you add a new chapter. I'm at firekittendema@hotmail.com Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Lander McKay On: July 18, 2005 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a very big Sephiroth and Aerith fan, and I have to say that your fic is the best I've read so far. I love the way you write, first off. You do an excellent job of bringing the reader in your world. I also enjoy how true to character you've stayed. Most of the fics I've read have portrayed Sephiroth as either a violent, lustfull and down right evil bastard or as a greif ridden puppet. Aerith always leaves you wondering how someone that naive survived in the slums for that long. You made them feel very believable, and somehow made the romance believable too. I also like how you never bash Tifa, and how you captured Vincent so well. Basically I think you're whole story is awesome, and I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Phoenix9151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh i agree with miara this is easily the most well created fanfic i've ever read...
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Reviewed By: Miara (not logged in) On: July 05, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I just found this fic now, instead of two years ago. The frustration of waiting for more would probably have killed me (now it's still possible, so you aren't allowed to stop writing it now, just because you graduated ;-) Good characters, excellent writing, and lots of stuff I can't figure out. The world needs more fics of this quality!
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