| "Path of Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: November 12, 2005 08:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heya, still waiting for chappy 25, hope you post it some time soon, its been ages since the last update o_O
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Reviewed By: ZeldaFalcon On: July 31, 2005 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has been a very enjoyable fic to read. Hopefully you will have time to finish it, what with being out of school and all. If you've got time, drop me a line when you add a new chapter. I'm at firekittendema@hotmail.com Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Lander McKay On: July 18, 2005 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a very big Sephiroth and Aerith fan, and I have to say that your fic is the best I've read so far. I love the way you write, first off. You do an excellent job of bringing the reader in your world. I also enjoy how true to character you've stayed. Most of the fics I've read have portrayed Sephiroth as either a violent, lustfull and down right evil bastard or as a greif ridden puppet. Aerith always leaves you wondering how someone that naive survived in the slums for that long. You made them feel very believable, and somehow made the romance believable too. I also like how you never bash Tifa, and how you captured Vincent so well. Basically I think you're whole story is awesome, and I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Phoenix9151 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh i agree with miara this is easily the most well created fanfic i've ever read...
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Reviewed By: Miara (not logged in) On: July 05, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I just found this fic now, instead of two years ago. The frustration of waiting for more would probably have killed me (now it's still possible, so you aren't allowed to stop writing it now, just because you graduated ;-) Good characters, excellent writing, and lots of stuff I can't figure out. The world needs more fics of this quality!
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: July 04, 2005 23:39 EDT
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yeh that was a long wait o.o but worth it i guess^^ lol ayame is so cool XD please update soon!
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: July 03, 2005 11:20 EDT
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WOOOOOOOT!!!! I loved this chapter! Here is Haichu, as promised. I liked the interaction between Ayame and Aeris, and now I'm itching to know more about Adrean.... Now I just gotta wait until your NEXT update which hopefully won't be as long a wait as this one!
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Reviewed By: Rhiara [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 13:10 EDT
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UPDAAAAAAATE!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEASE!!! I will give you..... ummmm... pocky? Panda candy? Nah but seriously, I adore this fic, and I'm hankering for some more! It's really well written, and even being a grammar nazi I hardly found any mistakes in that department at all. I like how it follows the thread of the game so closely but doesn't interfere with it at all. All in all, me likey a lot. SO UPDATE! ...please? I know what I'll offer! Haichu!! Have you ever had this, the GOD of all Japanese Candy? Grape is the best flavor. Trust me, once you've had haichu...nothing will ever be the same again... MUAHAHAH (sorry, it's 3 in the morning... not good time...)
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Reviewed By: yo-yo On: June 16, 2005 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of god update soon!
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Reviewed By: devildice708(not logged in) On: May 16, 2005 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sephiroth...seductive...? Never heard of that! This is a really cool story. I plan to read more of this.
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Reviewed By: chocolate button On: May 04, 2005 05:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So what's he going to do? Plan another seduction i hope
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Reviewed By: Fallenrose On: April 20, 2005 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thatlast chapter was great. Just thinking of Seph trying to explain an emotion that until now was alien to him is just brilliant. I wonder how he's going to tell Aeris his feelings? I'm sure there will be some seduction and lovin'first though.
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Title: Awesome Work
Reviewed By: InuZWMN729 On: April 11, 2005 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. I can't wait for you to update it. I've always been a big believer on the Aeris/Sephiroth together-ness. Keep up the good work, and keep it coming!!
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Reviewed By: Mai24 On: April 10, 2005 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GREEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAT! I've been following the story for a while- can't remember if I've reviewed though.... I'd left off somewhere around C9 or something But I've spent the last day or so rrading the rest and I think this fic is awesome! Aris kicks ass! Tifa gets a life! Cloud's a dunce but is still funny! BArret isn't a complete jerk! And Cid...well, Cid should get his ass whooped by all the girls at once and learn some manners. :)Vince hasn't played a large part yet, but I like the friendship Red has w/ everyone. And I laughed my ass off at the things Jenova has been saying since the Canyon. I always saw her as that evil bitch that you want to kill off ASAP; but here I think she's more of a crazy aunt-type figure you want to gag every once in a while. She still has to die, and Seph has to live tho. I'll comment now on ur writting style: Jenova's changed A LOT- from bitch to aunt & Seph's tuened into a stumbling 16 yr old. I like it all the same, but it seems to have lost a bit of the maturity from previous chaps. I don't know if it's b/c he feels boyish b/c of the love or b/c he's suddenly comfortable with the crowd but it's nice. Don't stray too far from the original flow or it'll turn bad, and in a fic as good as this one it would be a crying shame to see happen. Much love and luck, Mai ^___^
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