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| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Title: impressed
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is quite long and great like everyone says and i have to agree. But i desperatly want to know how the story ends, so Kimberly-san, please update. Some say that there are flaws like "lusty teens" but i say it doesn't matter because we get the point. And again, please, update ASAP.
| Reviewed By: Fyorie Jusdyus Auricor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, now to the rating: as mentioned and reiterated by others before me, this is a great fanfiction story. Flawed, but nontheless great (and wonderful, magnificient, etc). Flawed because of usually mild mistakes in spelling (I'm not sure about grammar, since it looked alright to me; I'm not a native speaker of English), wordiness, and (rarely) context ("lusty teens", in particular, severely implies a merely physical relationship; I advise against using it with Shinji and Rei's clearly romantic attachtment); and great because of the originality of the main plot, the unique characterization (OOC is expected, as Third Impact and Instrumentality were clearly of cataclysmic proportions), and the balanced equilibrium between romantic love and carnal desire in Shinji and Rei's relationship. This, in my humble opinion, is enough to outset the use of some repeated themes. That is all that I have to say for now, except that I will be waiting for more updates. And to all faithful fans of Kimberly-san: please, try to be sympathetic and send an encouragement e-mail to Kimberly-san, without excessive flattering and enthusaism.
| Reviewed By: Fyorie Jusdyus Auricor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 01:56 CST
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First, I\'d like to thank KeyTobias5-san for his selfless concern and providing such vital and critical information on the author\'s current status (look the previous page of reviews); it is rare that we see such morals in our unfortunately dark and predominantly amoral world, otherwise there would not have been so much conflict and misery. But I digress. Allow me to address those who asuume they have the right send such malicious, destructive reviews. 1) You are nothing but ranting, high-and-mighty throngs of sore people who are jealous of Kimberly-san's prowess. 2) If you don't like the story, then why are you here? Don't go and blame someone else for your mistakes, for "the sin is yours", solely yours. 3) Just because no one had reported your misconduct to MediaMiner.Org's administrator(s) before doesn't mean no one ever will; personally, I am going to write a complaint about this immediately after posting my review. 4) There is no way I am going to take anything I said back, come Hell or high water. Death threats, hacking attempts, and virus/worm attacks will be treated as used toilet paper. There is no way am I standing down, for I will not abandon this wonderful and magnificient masterpiece. (Not that it's flawless; flaws are part of the human nature and valuable lessons for the future.)
| Title: Cant believe it!
Reviewed By: Caligoiel On: August 25, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I havent enjoyed a fic this much in absolutely ages! And to see its been SO LONG since it has been updated has made me so depressed! I want to see everything happy again, but most importantly (for me at least) I want to see Asuka happy for once :)
| Reviewed By: 9q873 On: May 30, 2005 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to be shitting me that you gave up on this story...damnit, I was really addicted with this and was like reading nonstop for AGES and then some authoress GAVE UP!?! Oh well, I respect your decisions however I wish to point out a few things. Firstly, I remember seeing a doozo somewhere and you said it meant please. Doozo is more of a 'Here you go' definition rather than please. If you want please, you want 'onegai' which is their way of saying please but is more literally defined as 'I beg of you'. Secondly, I do believe that you overuse some adjectives. Whenever you describe their kiss, you say hungrily or greedily to a point where it loses its effect. I suggest you might want to use a different adjective for such situations. Same goes for lusty teens. Or you could try and put in a completely different phrase instead. And thirdly, there were a few spelling errors, the only one I remember at this point being 'gratefully' which you spelt 'great fully'. Other than that it was a brilliant and addictive story and I really wished I could see more rather than be stuck on this cliffhanger which destroys it. Could you at least make one last chapter where you just give it an ending no matter how crap it is? Although that's really impossible because of your incredible writing skills. Haha Good luck
| Title: left something out...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:08 CDT
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btw, i reviewed up to chapter 36, forgot to mention that. I don't personally review every chapter, but the story (thus far) in its whole. I can dream for an update, but...its entirely your choice. However, i think quite a few fans (myself included) would be very happy to one.
| Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say i am very much impressed here. This is a GREAT Evangelion fic...however, looking at the last time something was updated here..I must say it is a damn shame we'll be seeing an update...*sigh* In any case, I loved your style of writing. Including the person's thoughts while they speak showing what they truly feel is somethingi felt you have done a wonderful job. I wish there were a few more styled fics like your's actually. Your spelling and grammar, in a few places, were only a bit spotty and in my opionion do not detract from the overall enjoyment of this fic, as you were still be able to get across your meaning. I loved the plotline. Seeing Ikari and Ayanami together is not too common and you did an incredible job of portraying it. Starting them out as roommates, then working them up to a married couple would be hard to do, but you did a great job. Overall, keep it up (if you still write, cause it'd be a damn shame if you don't) cause the world need good fanfics like this one. Peace!
| Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 09:35 CDT
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Eh, we can dream. It'd be very nice if this rose from the ashes, but I agree... I don't think this is going anywhere, anytime. Such a damn shame too...
| Reviewed By: GLH On: March 21, 2005 00:38 CST
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Listen people, she gave up on the damn thing. Don't ANY of you realize that?
| Reviewed By: Benji Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 10:57 CST
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Really good story. You should continue it. It is too good to be left with out an ending.
| Reviewed By: Dcwestby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Time and again, there are plotlines that feature horribly miscommunicational events. Such as what you write about here, with the subject of the chapter... Assumptions r us ... I like this story.
| Reviewed By: GLH On: December 07, 2004 21:47 CST
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Yeah, I think this is a dead and abandoned fanfic.
| Reviewed By: Vo!d On: October 07, 2004 17:49 CDT
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Yargh...nice fic. Sadly, the ppl who said that this fic was last updated at June something were wrong. If you look at the review that andres ocasio put on September 22nd, that he had read up to the 36 chapter. That means that the last chapter was here Sept. 22nd.
| Reviewed By: CHAOS X On: September 27, 2004 20:36 CDT
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Yo kim..you might not now who I am, but if you look at some of the old reviews you might see that I have made a few small comments.just to let you know.. Iv been waiting then,Im waiting now ,and will no dout be waiting for a long time no matter what.Im still one of your biggest fans..Update soon:)
| Reviewed By: Da J-Man On: September 22, 2004 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this is a great fic read up to ch 36 please continue this and any other storys you have written thank you P.S you are never a failure un less you fail to try
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