| "Training Session" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reji On: March 24, 2003 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I have to agree with everybody, this fic was yummy. I'm glad you don't picture Gohan as a sissy, like most people do. Keep up! |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 05, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are really good with writing hentai! Its not harsh and rude like some I've read or rather tried to read. Its enjoyable and provocative without being disgusting. Thank you for writing like you do! |
Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not easy to find a good one shot lemon with Gohan and Videl. In fact, I stopped looking a long time ago but somehow found my way to this little number. Very good.
My only comment is that you break up your paragraphs a little more. It gives a better flow to read with and is easier to follow when you start a new one everytime a new person talks or thinks. Otherwise, very good. I like how you didn't portray Gohan as a bumbeling idiot the first time in the sack. It was refreshing to see him as the agressor for once ^_^ I will definately read Forbidden Fruit next time I'm here. |
Reviewed By: VenusChan On: September 11, 2002 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great fanfic! i loved it! i never see too many gohan and videl fanfics. and i'm glad i finally found a great one. keep up the great work. i hope u write more about gohan and videl!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that. Nicely written, fairly original, very enjoyable, and just overall a good story. I hope to read more of your work. |
Reviewed By: Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. Neither one seemed out of character. They were both very much in. Gohan's kawaii self with that eeevil saiyajin sex drive. Ooooohhh You gotta love the saiyajins |
Reviewed By: Winddancer On: June 19, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, didnt see that coming!! i'm not usually into reading hentai, but that was pretty good. Think it went a little fast though. You could have slowed it down a bit. |
Reviewed By: point26 On: May 03, 2002 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fan fic its like realy cool now im goona read forbiden fruit |
Reviewed By: Person in luv with Gohan On: May 01, 2002 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Both your "Training Session" and "Forbidden Fruit" fan fics are absolutly adorable!!!!! sure they may be a BIT different to your average fanfic but i still fall in luv with them. You have great writing skills and should continue writing mor of these sort of fanfics, espcially with Gohan in them because obviously i LUV Gohan. (isn't he the cutest!?) |
Reviewed By: SMiler2K2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was to say the least *interesting*
Keep on writing |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God bless your soul. This was absolutely positively wonderful. Are you going to write more? |
Reviewed By: mystic_writer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Wow!* This was a good fic!!! Keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus On: January 07, 2002 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
That was great, I really enjoyed reading your fic! |
Reviewed By: mullet On: January 06, 2002 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great fic! very fun to read.i loved it.keep writing more.
peace |
Reviewed By: 2 nyce On: January 06, 2002 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
another training session?lol great fic keep it up.*note to gohan:u go gohan!whoo! |
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