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Reviewed By: Skyfox On: October 21, 2002 14:21 CDT
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*blinks reading chapter 21* *reads the part about Dragonbane* oh not likeing where that is going... please PLEASE don't have Haruka trick Hotaru into useing it on Grey... I'd hate to see his trust in her shattered like that.... keep this story light! Let Grey get the girl in the end!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rodon On: October 19, 2002 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minako catgirl form fits her down to the speech. I just wonder how long it will be before the princess crosses the border of the god and how will Uranus finally deal with it if she hasn't before Usagi crosses the border. ^_^; How will Grey's dragon sister react to all of this, come to think of that how will his father and step-mother (dragons) react to it. I cann't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: bob On: October 18, 2002 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work. cant wait for complete chapter 21. are you finally going to have grey settle down in this fic, i think its about time. |
Reviewed By: bob On: October 18, 2002 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work. cant wait for complete chapter 21. are you finally going to have grey settle down in this fic, i think its about time. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 22:17 CDT
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Poor Minako just can't get a break, I really want to know what that last form was. :) |
Reviewed By: Piccolo181 On: October 16, 2002 20:13 CDT
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You forgot Princess Mononoke. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 23:10 CDT
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Poor Minako! To find those kinds of things just floating around where anyone could find them. It should prove interesting to see what happens next. If the scouts keep bothering him, using him as a means to get rid of thier enemies and fix their problems, he's going to do something really horrible.
o_O;; |
Reviewed By: Piccolo181 On: October 12, 2002 16:12 CDT
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You can still make me laugh. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 01:26 CDT
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Heh, I have to wonder where in the world you come up with this stuff ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jenova Silverstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word:
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 11:34 CDT
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>Excuse me - 'gas main explosion' at the Tendo >Dojo? Yeah right.
HEHEHEHEHE...HEHAHA!! |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 10:47 CDT
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BWHAHAHAHAHAHAH!! Excelent as always, keep up the great work!!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 05:29 CDT
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Cool, you're almost up to chatper 17, where I recall you left off and I can't wait for more new chapters. Good luck ^_^ |
Reviewed By: leafkin On: November 01, 2002 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter its about time grey gets a happy ending but that doesnt mean you can stop writing now. keep up the good work we all love it. |
Reviewed By: Skyfox On: October 15, 2002 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice logic behind the purification. It makes sense in a way, the senshi's reaction to our hentai thougths concerninghtem ^_^. I'm likeing where this is going. Hmm I wonder if Grey will get aharem this time around? Although if its a single person I'm putting my money on Hotaru ^_^. Nice fight with Uranus to. Only thing i can complain about in chapter 20 is the short scene concerning the CIA girl. It was a bit confusing, especially the line about how fess was sure no one would be happy about it. Hope you can clarify that abit.
Hmmm I wonder what Minako's transformation will be like? You indicated earleir that when a senshi passes the boundry of the gods home, they are transformed but their transformation is shaped around there desires. Hmmm.. should prove intersting.
Oh! Can we have more Youma like tastee? *or better yet a subplot following her journey though the penal system* One of the most itnersting uses of Youma I found was ina Ranma/SM fic where the Youma was relativly peace loving surviovr of beryls kingdom and jsut wanted to live in peace and find love. Unfortunatly the author killed off the Youma minutes after introducing her, which annoyed me as I thought the concept had potential.
Well heres to more fun chapters ^_^ I hope Grey gets a good matchup at teh end of this fic ^_^ |
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