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"Dragonball Victory : Legends Never Die" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ]
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 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I kinda wish they had forgottten Roshi, but I guess it makes it more interesting this way.
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:49 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww. Piccolo and Kaeru, how sweet.
Anyway, cool chap. I was really surprised by the growing relationship you created between Piccolo and Kaeru.
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So she is a vampire......
Ok them. Hmmmmmm... Anyway, that gives me something to think about. How can she be in the sunlight though?
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:17 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi again. What's with the fangs?! Hmmm...
Great chapter by the way.
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kick Vegeta's butt, Kaeru!!!!!!!
Anyway I hope she wins.
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I wonder how Vegeta will do in this match... I bet (like you said in your summary) he'll get his but kicked.
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 14:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another cool chapter. I wonder how come Kaeru seems to be a saiyan too. Hmm... I'll read the next chapter now...
 Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 13:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi. An okay first chapter. I'll read the next chapter now. Bye.
 Reviewed By: GenevieveAlure [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 07, 2002 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Plot hole! What's going on with Bulma/Vegeta/The baby!!!!
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