"Dragonball Victory : Legends Never Die" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Girl power!!!
Anyway, cool chapters. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Creepy chapter. I wonder what's coming... |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's me again. What happened to Dende? An okay chapter by the way. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good chapter. It was pretty funny at the end. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ewwwww, blood. That was weird, but a great chapter nonetheless. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I bet Roshi would do that too!
Anyway, nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter. I kinda wish they had forgottten Roshi, but I guess it makes it more interesting this way. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwwwwww. Piccolo and Kaeru, how sweet.
Anyway, cool chap. I was really surprised by the growing relationship you created between Piccolo and Kaeru. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: So she is a vampire......
Ok them. Hmmmmmm... Anyway, that gives me something to think about. How can she be in the sunlight though? |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi again. What's with the fangs?! Hmmm...
Great chapter by the way. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kick Vegeta's butt, Kaeru!!!!!!!
Anyway I hope she wins. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice chapter. I wonder how Vegeta will do in this match... I bet (like you said in your summary) he'll get his but kicked. |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another cool chapter. I wonder how come Kaeru seems to be a saiyan too. Hmm... I'll read the next chapter now... |
Reviewed By: ChocolateEclar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 13:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi. An okay first chapter. I'll read the next chapter now. Bye. |
Reviewed By: GenevieveAlure [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 22:47 CST Comment/Review: Plot hole! What's going on with Bulma/Vegeta/The baby!!!! |
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