| "Outlaw Star: Growing Pains" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: riye On: December 31, 2002 11:00 EST
Comment/Review:
please add in the rest of the story quickly |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the few Lemons out there that has a really good back story in it. loved the pairings done here but with me being a Tenchi Muyo fan you can guess whay I like Gene to be with Mel and Suzuka ! The only thing was a not a kick ass of an ending as it could have been, and I wished that Leila would have gottebn with Jim and Aisha eventually but you didn;t say anything about that. Hey Will Genes daughters bag Jim's son?????
Great way toi continue the Business, and sequel maybe?!?!?!?
dennisud
P.S.- Bing fan of Suzuka, Melfina, and Aisha liked what you did for them here! Though Mel was way OOC! |
Reviewed By: Logan kale [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always loved this story. shame fanfiction net had to go so amazingly stupid and delete all the nc-17 this fic is so unbelievably awesome. i am a big jim ashia fan, and this fic is so incredibly awesome. lol well i think i will stop before i kiss off any semblence of pride. awesome awesome fic man. |
Reviewed By: indigo kitten On: December 13, 2002 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your obviously a fanatasic writer(hope you know that)and I'm glad, no, appericative that you took a chance writing a fic about the often forgotten characters. you know the characters very well, and was able to achieve the perfect lemon that was believable and delicious. keep up the good work, and thanx for writing about my favorite character... Aisha |
Reviewed By: Stranger On: November 27, 2002 14:39 EST
Comment/Review:
I read the story on FF.net but the sonofabitchs took out all of the NC-17 storys out. And now its here! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: les miserables On: October 22, 2002 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic do some more aisha lemons pleeeeeeeease! |
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