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Reviewed By: Peeves On: April 06, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey yo, just to tell ya that one I reviewed for Celebrations was REALLY for this one... My computer mixed up when I pushed the back button too many times I guess... or something like that, now while you were probably trying to figure out why it didn't go along with you Celebration story, that’s why! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 15, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
... wow. I can't believe that happened... so very different from what I expected... although, I'm not sure what I was expecting... Never saw such a crazed, insane Ken, bent on getting Davis before. oO;
Well written, as is everything you write. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U killed my Davis ;_; I'll 4give u though if u keep writing these fics |
Reviewed By: Tallulah On: December 12, 2002 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I didn't exactly enjoy this, but it's very eerie and freaky so I gave it 9 because it affected me emotionally. The idea, the characterisation, the details and the general...freakiness of it all were excellent. Your style has improved since though. Geez, you really weren't happy about those mocks, were you? |
Reviewed By: Lasafara On: November 09, 2002 00:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't feel like rating it, cuz that's just annoying to do. I'll just tell you I really liked it. I loved seeing another side to Ken, one that almost never comes out. Mainly cuz few people are brave enough to write a fic where a main and popular character goes insane. I love your stories, and you need to get Shattered back up. That was a fav of mine. *pouts*
Anyway, love it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kaitou Miko On: November 07, 2002 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Empress Why! WHy!!!!!!! I know he didn't help you in that exam but why did you have to be so cruel!!!!! :;sobs:: I loved this story and I felt that the last chapter was so poetic so wonderful...it almost reminded me of a story called "a rose for emily" where she loved this guy so much ((he was gay though)) and she killed him and kept his corpse and slept beside him everynight...of course she didn't mummify him and it wasn't half well written as yours and not as romantically insane but yes i loved your story!!!!Anyway i thought it was so tragic! And I loved how Ken stayed with him somehow though it moves me to tears...Please finish posting the rest of your fics ^^ I miss reading them! Oh! I love your fluff too! I just finished reading "I dare you" and it put me in such a good mood!!!!!!::sobs:: this one ended so bitterly....and yet like i said before at least he stays with Davis..kinda..okay okay I'll stop ranting.....::runs off sobbing:: |
Reviewed By: Syrup On: November 03, 2002 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just.. wow. |
Reviewed By: Kinu-uni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I finally read it... I don't know what to say... Wow? You kind of brought me through my entire emotional scale there...
You must have been really mad at him *grins* I am glad Toshi and Akemi did a better job at your finals, otherwise I wouldn't even want to think what you would do to them. The reason for the enjoyment factor being 9 is that I am not much of a horror story person.
Oh and just to people who want to read the story but is checking the reviews first, do NOT listen to 'Dessert Rose' while reading this, it'll do you no good..
.... Just looked below what I am writing and I totally agree with Warrior Goddess of Insanity. You need to finish Toshiki's Secret... Okay I am done now.... |
Reviewed By: Kia On: October 25, 2002 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fic is really good!! I can't believe Ken killed Davis in the end and he has gone mad. But I just love the way you wrote this fic and about Ken's obession with Davis. I'll rate this ten out of ten!! |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH On: October 14, 2002 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Second chapter.. Sad, but I rather like it. Got to love the last line ^_~. Daisuke ;_;.. |
Reviewed By: Lindsay On: October 12, 2002 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much and I am so glad you decided to move tehm to this website after fanfiction.net kicked them off. Please do Toshiki's secret soon, it's my fav! And please continue it. All of your stuff is really good! |
Reviewed By: Lydia NightShade On: October 12, 2002 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot. The ending was sad cause Davis never escaped but at the same time I really enjoyed it because he had the last laugh. Very well done, you should write for revenge more often! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BloodyErszebeth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
since I'm a blood thirsty vampire, I love this fic. Plain and simple. |
Reviewed By: Warrior Goddess of Insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH!! I still love your fics... though you have to hurry up and finish Toshiki's Secret. If you don't post it within the next week I will be forced to start emailing you daily *psychotic look* I will not be ignored! Muwahahahahahahahahaha!!!!! Even the magical Bamboo agrees with me.
Magical Bamboo: Please just post it. The quicker you do, the faster she'll shut up and be distracted bny a shiny object.
Nakago: I would never be distracted by a... *a flying saucer flies by* Oooh, Shiny!
Magical Bamboo: See |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
OO; Ken drinks? Nice fic. I like the characterization. ^^ |
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