| "Zana-sei" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 02:52 CST
Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Title: *a reviewer as often as a poster-- infrequent, at best*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* Yup. Perfect chapter title. Very TASTEY punishment. But annoying as Hell! *grumbles* Once it's happened to you, you're never the same. Heh. Sex as pain and pleasure. Fulfillment and punishment. Yuppers. "Mating" is an odd thing. Why can't we get enough of it? Can't wait for more. All the rituals sound... enticing. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Dark Rose of Castella On: September 15, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant say 10 on enjoyment till it is over :) but it is going good |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter, as usual. Just a few minor speling errors, nothing big I just thought I'd mention it. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see your next chapter. Oh and that's great on your engagement!!! Good Luck!!! |
Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: September 08, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, haha poor Bulma. I can't to see what Bulma's gonna do to throw off Vegeta? That should be intresting. Ja ne! |
Title: Great story
Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow youur story is great. i can't wait for you to write more. =) :) |
Title: Great story
Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow youur story is great. i can't wait for you to write more. =) :) |
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: July 01, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job thus far, i know i reviewed on ffnet. Anyway I think your great at lime/lemons. Keep going I can't wait to see whats next ja ne |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 24, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE, CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess On: May 17, 2003 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was one hell of a sample! I want more so bad! wahhhahahahahah1 |
Reviewed By: dancingstarchic On: May 13, 2003 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg! this is great! i luv it... update soon! your writing style is great! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: May 06, 2003 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Creative Idea! Never read a b/v a/u like this one before - i.e. one where Bulma has no clues about sex and Vegeta turns down her offer. I like B/V's characterization in this one - neither are too dark or too sweet (very rarely are they portrayed as a cute couple). Witty, romantic, suspenseful, original... so please say you'll update soon~! (lemon in 2?) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice one, although I was hoping the lemon was next. *frowns* Sorry, patience isn't one of my strong points. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: dancingstarchic On: April 24, 2003 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! this is SO great! u better update soon b4 i go crazy! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAH! no means no huh? I'd never thought I'd see the day when vegeta said no to sex with bulma...wow...lol...
This fic so far is coming out great!, and I think you should continue whenever possible! Because I'm sure lots of people would love it very much! |
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