| "The Shuffle" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 On: March 17, 2003 15:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again, you may not know this but you are one hell of a writer. Well, I defanatly think that Jyou and Hikari should make it out ok. As for Yamato I'm just guessing but I think you have him slated to fail, so I say T.K. should make it through. Sora should also make it but Tai should fail. |
Reviewed By: some canadian named steve On: February 18, 2003 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Takeru in Iori's body should have gotten the crest of hope (unless he did and i just read it wrong.) other than that, it's a ten. i think taichi and sora should succeed and there be a lemon scene with them. i also think hikari should get her body back and so should takeru with a little lemon in there somewhere (you can tell what pairings i favor). |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 20:38 EST
Comment/Review:
interesting... jyou n hikari? hmm... pretty good, a lil bit confusing but thats to be expected. i like it, update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: January 25, 2003 02:34 EST
Comment/Review:
Well I'm definately glad for the update I've been looking forward to the conclusion of this story. I'm worried for the groups since thier facing a seriously sadistic enemy ( I despise clowns). If I had to guess I would say that Mimi or miyako would fail ( I'm referring to the spirits not the bodies) since they have the most qualms about killing digimon. |
Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper On: January 24, 2003 08:48 EST
Comment/Review:
I really want Jyou and Hikari to change back, I really feel sorry for Hikari, suddenly jumping to the end of her teenage years. And even though I've got a sneaky suspicion you're going to do the opposite, I would like Taichi and Sora to change back. I personally don't care if anyone else does. I think it might be funny for Daisuke to spend the rest of his life as Mimi. I bet June would love a sister, hah! |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 24, 2003 07:53 EST
Comment/Review:
*chuckle* Good stuff. Why does Miracles look like a stealth fighter? Odd. I'll send the votes to your direct mail |
Reviewed By: Lemon Hentai On: January 24, 2003 03:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Jyou/Hikari to succeed. I want lemon scenes with them. |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 02:41 EST
Comment/Review:
Piemon has a wierd sense of humor doesn't he. Well I see that things a getting even more confusing, sometimes I wonder how you even manage to keep the personalities straight. I'll admit you are one hell of a writer, if I tried to do a story like this they would have me thrown into the loony bin for sure. Hahaha well keep up the good work, this story is getting better and better. |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 08:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Mugen Dramon, Check.
Pinnochiomon, Check.
Vamdemon, Check (last Chapter)
Metal Seadramon, absent, but accounted for. (Chapter 6)
Out of the major players, That just leaves Devimon, Etemon and Apocalymon. |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 08:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Actually, what's happening to everyone is starting to intrude on Terry Pratchett Territory: Form Defines Function
Piemon's putting together a serious army, isn't he? |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: January 02, 2003 17:45 EST
Comment/Review:
Happy New Year, this fic is fun to read, though I have a feeling that the day the DD recieve thier traits is going to ba a bit insane. Great work though please keep it up |
Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper On: January 01, 2003 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to get the next chapters out soon! Of course, I already know who is going to get what crest, but, I can't wait to see the battle with the new Dark Masters. Plus, I want to know who switches back and who doesn't!
All in all, still great as usual! |
Reviewed By: Dudey On: November 01, 2002 17:43 EST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. It must really sucks being stuck in someone else's body. |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 03:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another 10 outa 10. This story keeps getting better and better. Great job with T.K. his memory loss is funny. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: November 01, 2002 01:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I am confused as to why Mediaminer keeps claiming that RDD has been updated when I can see no real change to the chapters but this was updated properly and I am glad. This is definatly one of the more confusing and more enjoyable fics that you have writeen though I am worried about the safty of the chosen when they aren't sure about thier powers. Where are thier digimon anyway they are going to need them if they are going to defend themselves. Great story keep it up |
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