| "How Did THAT Happen?!" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Legolas Greenleaf72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were kinda starting to lose it, but now you're getting it all back. Keep the motherfucking writing up. |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: June 06, 2003 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the teachers reaction in the previous draft was more realistic.
Other than that, great stuff as always. |
Reviewed By: TiggsPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okaaaaaay. Now that was too wierd.
Well it sure seems that the adventures that Digimon and Chosen go through have given them very strange ways of dealing with trauma in this fic-world.
It's very disturbing, yet morbid curiosity makes me want to continue reading. |
Reviewed By: Lord Helpme On: May 08, 2003 05:45 CDT
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My personal recommendation for a future chapter would be an exploration of how Gatomon and Aquilamon's Jogress Evolution might affect their emotions toward their partners and significant others. I see much amusement value in the myriad possibilities this idea posesses, among... other things. Nudge, nudge, wink, wink, say no more. |
Reviewed By: Freyna On: April 07, 2003 08:40 CDT
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Oy, like the others have said here, that did go a bit farther than I might have liked. Doesn't keep it from being a good fic though. :D
One thing I have to ask. Are you ever going to keep any of them virgins? |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 02, 2003 15:42 CST
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Twisted. I honestly can't believe I read that. Guess I'm more like a moth than I'd like to admit. I'll probably read the next chapter whenever you get around to it. |
Reviewed By: Sapphire Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the recent chapter posted was quite... vivid... yeah, that's the world I do believe I am searching for. As all the other reviews have stated, you are quite brave in writing something that concerned Sora shitting on Taichi. I did enjoy, even though I dislike that couple very much (you know us yaoi girls) |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 17:47 CST
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of all the smut, chapter six was the best. the other smut wasn't that interesting, then again i'm kind of bias. i like fluff with my smut. the basic story line is pretty good but you got away from it totally. are you planning on going back to it any time soon? i like the story, but i can get smut almost anywhere. please continue the plot soon? |
Reviewed By: Logan kale [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man, big fan from fascist..err fanfiction.net it's a crime that they removed the nc-17, your fics are truely top-notch. i haven't reviewed before because i get the feeling a talent like yours wins about all the praise your insulin levels can handle.
i chose to review your work now because i recall hearing you say something about it mattering to you if you keep them in character. now i'm not sure if you're going for pure sex in these fics, or if you are treating them as more then just hentai, but i think there is one aspect of your character sora that could use refignment.
in this one you have birdramon talk about how tai is smaller then the average guy. well normally i think that's original, you went on to have her say that sora probably wouldn't have had a relationship with tai if she had known early on that he was going to be smaller then average.
that dosen't come close to meshing with sora's character, it's your perogative to change her how you see fit of corse, but if you're going for as close to the character as possible, and or, trying to paint them as a more healthy romance (as opposed to miyako and daisuke from the red digivice series) then you might want to avoid that in the future. it just struck me as very out of character, but of corse my opinion is pure conjecture and i don't know if you are going for realizm or just a no holds barred smutfest ^^
keep up with the good work. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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er... i just finished reading the 6th chapter... and its a bit much for me... ^_^;;;;;;... but u pulled it off nicely, i dont really like this couple or crossbreeding fics, but this fic is to funny to miss. a bit disturbing, but i think i liked it... ^_~;;;;;;;; |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 15:56 CDT
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Reviewed By: The Real Unknown On: October 07, 2002 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
while I didn't read one part of ch. 5 the rest was still good and you have some guts Lord Achive some real guts |
Reviewed By: Jay Man On: October 05, 2002 10:50 CDT
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Okay, that was a little bit much. Other than that this is an interesting if a bit distubing series and I am glad that you are still accesible |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Media Miner seems to be on a fast period (amazingly), soI've got a couple of D-Arc Dairies fics to catch up on.
Anyway, you HAVE been in a Dark mood lately haven't you? I didn't think anybody would have the balls to be this nasty... |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: January 04, 2003 06:45 CST
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Heh, back to sweetness. This is awesome. When exactly does this take place in relation to the rest of the series? |
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