| "Lina and Gourry: Love Conspiracies" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Title: woo hoo!
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! you are an amazing author! i absolutly love this peice and demand that you write more! you capture Gourry's stupidty and innocense perfectly! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Phareon On: September 10, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story line with a lot of places that the plot can go. I can't wait until the next chaper to find out what is going on. There was no clue about what Luna has to tell Lina other than that it will hurt her in some way. Everything in the story flows with an excellent rythm. I hope that there will be an update. With a story like this with every one Lina has ever met coming together in one place, something is going to happen and I want to know what it is. Good luck in all your future writing.
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Reviewed By: Miaka Kirino On: March 28, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh! Run! Hide, Lina! Look out, it's Naga! Oh my! *^_^* This is GREAT stuff! I can't WAIT to find out what Lina will do when she suddenly finds herself facing Naga again! I mean, I know Lina can handle Amelia just fine....but her sister's another story! And...what on earth with NAGA say? I mean, suddenly seeing her "greatest rival" again after several years! Actually, the Gabrievs owe their existence almost as much to Naga as to Lina....Lina wouldn't've been on Mipross in the first place if Naga hadn't dragged her there! Of course, the inept Naga wasn't able to actually do much of anything else, except realize that the hot springs were fake. And make that big mess on the dock....*decides that she must go watch the movie again* WAI!!! Sugoi!! *^_^* This is SOOOOO cool! *^_^* Poor Lina and Gourry, stuck here being pestered by so many people! But still, it is HIGHLY amusing! Annou....when is Luna gonna show up again? I mean, the prolouge centered on her, and something that she's supposed to go tell Lina....Uh-oh....is she gonna track down our favorite sorcery genius in a convienently compact package while poor Lina is trapped in a house full of Gourry's relatives? WAI!! *^_^* So can't wait to read more!! *^_^*
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Title: JackieChan DragonAngel
Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE tell me you will be adding more to this?! You can't stop there! I want to know what Luna's up too! What does she have to telll Lina?! And damnit! I want to be at Lina's wedding! *cries* You have made me laugh and cry with this story. You've done an EXCELLENT job with all the characters! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to finish this!!!
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Reviewed By: fangboy On: October 14, 2004 09:13 CDT
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NYO!!! You left a cliffy!!! Evil person. ^^ Naga and Rowdy? =_=
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Reviewed By: Jra-sama On: September 02, 2004 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
hello, you gonna update? i love the story, but it's been oh so long...
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Reviewed By: Betsy C. On: August 01, 2004 22:06 CDT
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There are no real words to say hoe wxceptional this story is. The way you write Lina and Gourry makes me love the series even more. I'm eagerly awaiting (no pressure) any updates you may throw my way. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Noseless Wonder On: July 23, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Has to be the best L/G fic I've read in a looooooong time! I see you haven't updated since Feb, but I sincerely hope you haven't given up on it! I loved your depiction of Gourry's family... warm and large... similar to a small community rather than just a family. It's probably the closest depiction to being canon I've read. Awesome writing style. Congratulations on pulling off the addition of ten or more original characters as well as you did. It's not an easy task, and most authors get lost in a sea of new characters and tend to make them generic and basically carbon copies of themselves. I loved how each new character had their own distinctive differences. They each behaved similar enough for you to know they were family, yet different enough to be different people. In effect, not only did you avoid the reader's suspicions of a self-insertion fic, but you made you characters loveable and memorable in a genre where only pre-existent characters with pre-existent plots get attention. (Fanfiction) Awesome job! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Utena the Black Rose On: June 22, 2004 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to finish this!!! It's so good! And I can't wait for Zel and Amelia's story either! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: Need more chapters!
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 22, 2004 19:59 CST
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Lina and Gourry: Love Conspiracies is a the best freaking story out there. Please don't have given up on this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: March 21, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was casually strolling through I realized you UPDATED! It was off the hook. Awesome, clever story. I'm seriously dying for that next chapter because I'm sure it's you-know-who. Cough*Naga*cough More please!
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Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: March 21, 2004 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was casually strolling through I realized you UPDATED! It was off the hook. Awesome, clever story. I'm seriously dying for that nect chapter because I'm sure it's you-know-who. Cough*Naga*cough More please!
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Reviewed By: arihat On: March 17, 2004 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! A masterpiece in the making and one of my all time favorite stories. I love how Lina's past keeps coming back to bite her on the ass. Please update really soon. Bye! ^_^
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Reviewed By: CT On: February 29, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. It's about time Lina confesed her felling for Gourry. I also liked the way the chapter ended. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what Lina's reaction will be. Hope to see the next chapter out soon.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: sleepyshippakakotamagic On: February 20, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh sweet merciful Lord.... how could you do something as cruel as bringing NAHGA into the Gabriev family???? Are you as nuts as all those relatives? LOL Hilarious story, but all the relatives and the familiar people they're married to/familiar with just gets way too confusing! Good story though
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