| "The Crow: Shinigami" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: yukina189 On: March 05, 2005 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is really good i hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply cannot wait to find out more of this yummy plot...I was upset when I first read that you killed off my honey Duo...but I was irrate when I found out who did it! But now I must find out what happens next! Yes it's an addiction and I'm now in thearpy for it...heheehehe...Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 12, 2002 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
only one word to sum-up this fic of yours;confused and angsty,...still,...i LLOOVEEEEEEE it VVERRRYYYYYY MUCHHHH,....*wink*...i love the movie CROW,...it's very tragicly romantic,...not to mention that the lead actor is VVERRRYYYYYYYYY HAAANNDDDSOMEEEEE,....*sssiigghhhhhh*...too bad that he's dead halfway in the making of the movie,....*pout*...all in all,..this fic of yours is really great,...and the suspends is killing me,...the BIG question is;WWWHYYYY did heero "kill" duo???...i'm abit confused on that part,...it's seems clear that duo is hopelessly in love with heero,...even after what happen,..he still loves him,....what about heero???..does he love duo too??..or maybe he was drug or something when he "kill" duo???...AAAArrrrrggg,...SOOOOOOOOOO many unanswer questions Neeee???...PPLLLEASEEEEEEE updated soon,...i can't wait to know what will happen next to my fav yaoi couple,...hope everything will end-up ok in the end between them,...keep-up the good work kay,...till next chapter,..JAAAAAA and GAAANBBBAATEEEEE-NEEEE!!!^_~!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*sniff sniff* This fic just gets to me. And, yes, I'm one of these people who just can't WAIT to find out WHY Heero did it. Did Une brainwash him or something!?!? *lol*
Still, despite the fact that I "can't wait" ... I'm patient enough to wait for the master document. heh. I take forEVer to update because I'm always re-editing stuff over and over before I post it ... USually. So ... I'll wait for the GREAT version. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original. Ok, so no in the whole "The Crow" aspect but incorporating it into the GW world was original.
I always was a sucker for betrayal. I like how you have the whole mystery surrounding why Heero killed Duo. 'Tis great to watch and the fact that Heero doesn't know (or won't fess up?) as to why he killed Duo is intoxicating, in a way.
On the contrary, I found the repetition of how Duo's died not boring at all. You didn't actually come to a full out explaination until chapter 4 and before that it was sketchy and I liked it. Of course, most people figured out what happened but having Duo say it like that to Hilde and saying he didn't know why Heero, the love of his life, killed him... I simply liked it.
I also find the fact that the yaoi is obviously there but not full blown a refreshing change. It's something that's always in front of you but transparent enough for you to be able to concentrate on the story and the way it develops.
I can't wait for chapter 5!
Keep up the good work!
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy On: November 02, 2002 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great and I can't wait till you update it. I'll have to go to ff.net now and read it..It sounds really good. I love 2X1 pairings. Soooo please update really soon. ja ne! |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you please update this fic! i need to know what happens! |
Reviewed By: nitid@gwyaoi.org On: October 29, 2002 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting and I'm enjoying the suspense. You haven't posted this to the gw-fan ml, or have you? I thought I read a similar Crow/GW fic there awhile ago, but somehow this seems much more engrossing. Do keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the 2x1 yaoi. :) |
Reviewed By: Night On: November 01, 2002 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
...so your Muse is causing you trouble? Maybe Halloween had gave her nice ideas or you can send Farfarello after her... But please keep on writing, I want to know what will happen in the next chapter(s)... For the YAOI part *smirks*, I'll impatiently wait... I'm really hoping for some more Crow supernatural with angst and maybe Heero will be really afraid!
Luv Duo & Deathscythe and *glaring* guys in tight spandex clothes! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 11:21 CDT
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that was sooooooo good!!! |
Reviewed By: Ashlee Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderfully written, and spooky too. And why the turtleneck did Heero kill Duo?! Une had something to do with this, right? Somehow it wasn't Heero's fault.... please? DON'T MAKE IT HEE-CHAN'S FAULT!!! |
Reviewed By: Night On: October 25, 2002 17:45 CDT
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I just hope to read some more, I liked the movie "The CROW" and it's quiet interesting to see it inspiring a GW fic... Please, more... maybe be a little yaoi (pretty please) |
Reviewed By: Tala On: October 21, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i have to know what happens please finish this fic. |
Reviewed By: Coy On: October 21, 2002 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo. This is extremely cool. Though did my eyes mistake me in one of the chapters? Could it be true that you've written five chapters, but alas, only have -two- posted?! I really want to see where all of this is going -- especially after the ending of chapter two. Nicely done. |
Reviewed By: Liralee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tada! Here's some positive reinforcement ^-^! (I'm putting it up here, since you said that you won't be logging on to FF.net)...
1). Chapter 2 is adorable... I absolutely love how you blend the dark Crow aspects of the tale with the light aspect of the reunion of the characters.
2). The relationship between Hilde and Duo... Nice, clear and concise. Not to mention that it’s a nice solid friendship (I can't stand Duo x Hilde romances).
3). The suspense and build-up of the fic - are great! (kay I'll admit to having run out of adjectives).
4). Please space chapter 5 out a bit... Also in Chapter 3 (towards the end of the middle) you have a little [1] and no corresponding comment...
5). I wish you the best of luck healing your broken bone, and I've simply got to agree with many of he things you said in your 'announcement of dissatisfaction'. |
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