| "Sealed Away" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Oh my god! Already in december and still no updates!!!!! :-__-;Have you forgotten us or just intended to kill us with the waiting?! (*cry* ;__;,snif!) Please,Do us an early present and finish your story!!!Pweaaaase!PRETTY PRETTY PINK PLEASE!!!!! WANNA KNOW THE END!! COME ON! ONLY one final chapter and epilogue! Good luck! Bye!
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Title: Still waiting... -__-;
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!It's me again!! Well, I understand that you must be really busy 'cause you have a life, and all...BUT it would really be great if you could just add your final chapter and prologue,ne?!! ^_^; Please!We've been all waiting for quite a time now!You've done such a great job so far, that' it would be a shame to just let it unfinished as it is,don't you think so?? So ,pwetty pleaaaaase!!! \\0__0// Keep going!!your style is really interesting!^.~ Bye! =)
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story is sooooooooo kewl!!!! you have to contineu it sooon!!! along with your other fics tooo.! continue when you can -hanamaru285
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Nicolle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is, beyond a doubt, one of the best I've read for a long time. The premise is interesting, the characters are well done, and the writing style holds the readers attention.
Your spelling is fine, but check your grammar: when you make a mistake, it slows down the reading. And find a friend to proofread. You have a few glaring vocabulary mistakes that a computer program will not pick up.
Please be nice enough to tell me that you also write outside of fanfiction. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah i always read the really good ones that havent been updated in forever. please! please! finish this! its incredible! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssse !!
go ON !!! I wanna know !!! |
Reviewed By: smcool213 On: July 01, 2003 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UPDATE!!! WHAT HAPPENDS!? DO KAGOMEA & SEIREI FIND OUT THAT HE IS THE REINCATNATION IF INU-YASH!? IS HE RILLY THE REINCARNATION OF INU-YASH!? TELL ME PLEAS!!!! I MUST KNOW!!! |
Reviewed By: smcool213 On: July 01, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UPDATE!!! WHAT HAPPENDS!? DO KAGOMEA & SEIREI FIND OUT THAT HE IS THE REINCATNATION IF INU-YASH!? IS HE RILLY THE REINCARNATION OF INU-YASH!? TELL ME PLEAS!!!! I MUST KNOW!!! |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must agree with all the previous reviews here :
your fanfic is reeeeeeeaallllyyyyy GREAT!!
And unfortunately it seems that it haven't been updated since a LONg time!!
So PLEEEAAASSSEE keep your promise!(you've promised to do one more chapter plus an epilogue!!)
Go on !This is really going well!
I can't wait for the next chapter!It would be so marvellous to see Inu Yasha and Kagome together again!!
Will be looking forward some updates! ^.~
Bye!
Usagitsukino |
Reviewed By: t-chan On: May 31, 2003 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more soon. write more soon that is!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: kaisei41 On: April 27, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. The characters are well developed and the plot keeps me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I hope you finish this soon. I was listening to "In My Mind" by SR-71 the other day and I was reminded of this fic. If you need any inspiration, I definetly recommend listening to it. Just look me up under mediaminer.org to e-mail me if you need a muse or any ideas for the story. InuYasha forever!!!
~Kai |
Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative, I hope you will find the time to finish the story. Nice job. |
Reviewed By: quico On: March 05, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story is very original, please keep up the good work. Finish it as soon as possible I really want to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Krazy Kat On: February 25, 2003 13:06 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying!!! Why did you leave off at such a horrible cliff hanger!!! Your so MEAN!!!! WHAT HAPPENED!!! I"M GONNA GO CRAZY!!!!!!! 10's all THE WAY!!!!!!!! Totall loves your FIK!! |
Reviewed By: miroku*luv-taij-ia On: February 20, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling is 9 because you wrote a typo and wrote Inuyasha instead of Seirei in chapter 8. ^_^ Other than that this is a great fictional piece of work and very creative. I'm happy that there's at least one writer out there that doesn't write what everyone else has written dozens of times. Please write more to this fic, I'm waiting for the next chapter hungrily. *drool* ^_~ Ja ne! |
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