| "Sealed Away" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: starry17 On: March 09, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
10+++++ I really like this fan fic. Very original i would think. I really hope you update soon! Super soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fire Witch1 (@ff.net) On: January 30, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO! I love this story. Where did you come up with Serie(sp?) as a name. Update asap! This is a great story! I noticed one usage mistake, you leave out your s-es when talking about one or more object insted of scrolls you put scroll when talking about one or more object. Like 'she dumped a huge pile of scroll in the desk.' instead of 'she dumped a huge pile of scrolls on the desk.' I blaim my languge teacher for me pointing that out. Gomen ne for any offence. -Britt ^^ love n' peace!
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Reviewed By: Sango_windwarrior On: October 20, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look at the date of this update, and it makes me cry 2002? (cries) it's 2004 and no update! it was sooooo beautiful i cant believe you stopped just when it was getting beyond beautiful! PLEASE UPDATE ONCE MORE.
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Reviewed By: BirkysSpy On: October 13, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had read this story before, and I just re-read it!! OOOh lala a cliff hanger! I hope you update soon. I know your probably busy, so I'll keep a look out for any updates. Great story you rock!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. Would like to see if Kagome brings back Inuyasha. Great story.
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Title: wheeha!
Reviewed By: Shadow Lupine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! i know you're probably busy, but could u PLEASE update as soon as u possibly can?! i want to read more!!
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! Oh my god! Already in december and still no updates!!!!! :-__-;Have you forgotten us or just intended to kill us with the waiting?! (*cry* ;__;,snif!) Please,Do us an early present and finish your story!!!Pweaaaase!PRETTY PRETTY PINK PLEASE!!!!! WANNA KNOW THE END!! COME ON! ONLY one final chapter and epilogue! Good luck! Bye!
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Title: Still waiting... -__-;
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!It's me again!! Well, I understand that you must be really busy 'cause you have a life, and all...BUT it would really be great if you could just add your final chapter and prologue,ne?!! ^_^; Please!We've been all waiting for quite a time now!You've done such a great job so far, that' it would be a shame to just let it unfinished as it is,don't you think so?? So ,pwetty pleaaaaase!!! \\0__0// Keep going!!your style is really interesting!^.~ Bye! =)
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story is sooooooooo kewl!!!! you have to contineu it sooon!!! along with your other fics tooo.! continue when you can -hanamaru285
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Nicolle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is, beyond a doubt, one of the best I've read for a long time. The premise is interesting, the characters are well done, and the writing style holds the readers attention.
Your spelling is fine, but check your grammar: when you make a mistake, it slows down the reading. And find a friend to proofread. You have a few glaring vocabulary mistakes that a computer program will not pick up.
Please be nice enough to tell me that you also write outside of fanfiction. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah i always read the really good ones that havent been updated in forever. please! please! finish this! its incredible! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssse !!
go ON !!! I wanna know !!! |
Reviewed By: smcool213 On: July 01, 2003 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UPDATE!!! WHAT HAPPENDS!? DO KAGOMEA & SEIREI FIND OUT THAT HE IS THE REINCATNATION IF INU-YASH!? IS HE RILLY THE REINCARNATION OF INU-YASH!? TELL ME PLEAS!!!! I MUST KNOW!!! |
Reviewed By: smcool213 On: July 01, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAS UPDATE!!! WHAT HAPPENDS!? DO KAGOMEA & SEIREI FIND OUT THAT HE IS THE REINCATNATION IF INU-YASH!? IS HE RILLY THE REINCARNATION OF INU-YASH!? TELL ME PLEAS!!!! I MUST KNOW!!! |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must agree with all the previous reviews here :
your fanfic is reeeeeeeaallllyyyyy GREAT!!
And unfortunately it seems that it haven't been updated since a LONg time!!
So PLEEEAAASSSEE keep your promise!(you've promised to do one more chapter plus an epilogue!!)
Go on !This is really going well!
I can't wait for the next chapter!It would be so marvellous to see Inu Yasha and Kagome together again!!
Will be looking forward some updates! ^.~
Bye!
Usagitsukino |
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