| "Heart of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure how to review reasonably, but I'll try.
I've given you a 9 for your style of writing since it's kinda darkish and angsty... VERY angsty like when the first chapter was about rape and then mysterious guardian and then Naki... that's not bad.
I know I've reviewed it previously with 10 for your spelling, but it seems like some words are either misspelled and misused like for example when you put 'your' for 'you are'
The creativity for 10 since it's an AU fiction and a VERY well-written one also. Good job!
A 9 for enjoyment is because I'm so emotional sometimes. I broke down a few times when reading your fic. But if you want I can give you a 10 anytime.
Keep on writing! Don't feel down because I've rated them with too much nines. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jessie Shockey On: January 09, 2003 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was pleasantly surprised by this fic. I'm glad I decided to read it, after all. Generally, I try to stear away from vampire AU stories, as they are very often well done. This story, however, is excellent, and I was truely disappointed when I reached the end of the currently posted chapters. I will most definatly be checking often to see if it has been updated.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Jessie Shockey
http://lemon-creampuff.org |
Reviewed By: anonymous celebrity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 11:29 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O Oh. My. God... poor Quatre and Trowa!! And Bastian, too... hell, poor EVERYBODY (except Nakki, I'm glad he's dead)... Write more, please! |
Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: December 16, 2002 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHoo Hoo! 10 out of 10, go you miss lady! I REALLY like this fic and wish you'd hurry up and write the next chapter! Poor Trowa and Quatre don't deserve this type of drama dangit! Anywho, I'm gonna keep checking to see if you updated this fic. And don't forget, I'm a reader on the edge, man. You don't know what I'll do next! Just kidding, I'm too small and puny to do anything to you. Just nip at your ankles like a small dog and hope I look scary. |
Reviewed By: Jenn On: December 12, 2002 16:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Now I usually stay away from GW vampire fics but this one is a cut above the rest. [Especially the use of Quat and Tro as the main characters]
However I must say something about Trowa. Trowa sweetie, suck it up! There is nothing more annoying than chroic remorse. Your a vampire, get over it.
Plus he's using Quatre like a hair shirt, as a way to punish himself, and that's not fair to either of them.
Icz |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wanted to review again!! WAAAIII! Please continue ^_^ I'm still wondering hen you're going to add more. I hope that wasn't the end. Now I'm feeling like giving you a 10 for style writing ^_^
PS I've received your reply ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sheiakurei On: November 22, 2002 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's ahrd to keep track of updates now and stuff. Plus ff.net diying and all. Anyways.. that was great!!
Absolutly Gorgeous! I can't wait for the rest! wai wai wai! Quatre.. come back to Trowa!! **sniffles and waves her 3x4 banner** |
Reviewed By: Sheiakurei On: November 22, 2002 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaiii!! updates!! I never thought I'd seem em again! Yes.. my account is stolen permanently. >. |
Reviewed By: Sheiakurei (whose account has been stolen..>. On: October 15, 2002 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came to check if you had ever updated this.. and you did! lucky for me eh? Anyways, read it, reviewing it and wanting it. I must say that I didn't really enjoy this chapter as much as the rest which were just awsome. This is just me of coruse. I am gratefull for finaly finding out that evil vampy thats torturing dear Q and haunting Trowa's past. I can't wait for the next one! **waves her txq banner** |
Reviewed By: Neko-Cin On: November 24, 2002 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic even though I've not read all of them. It was quite angsty and really... blood lusty or something (Is it that word?) I hope to read ALL of the chapters before I've too much work. |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 11, 2002 13:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aahhhhhh!!! Cliffhanger?! Nooooo!!!
*ahem* This is a really great fic! Wonderfully written! Just the right amount of sap and angst (and I love my angst), it's just all around great! Please, please, please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Fox On: October 08, 2002 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I found this fic again! I read some the early chapters on ff.net (the jerks!) and then lost track of it (much to my everlasting regret). I totally love this thing though, it is great, really creative and original. *falls to knees* Please post again soon! I need to find out what happens. Without great fics to fill my night I might have to do my homework (the pain! the horror!). Anyway, great story and post soon. |
Reviewed By: Tayles [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you're posting this here since ff.net are taking all the NC17s away *pout* My muses are baying for blood but they're happy to see that people like you are moving here to mediaminer ^.^
I love, love, love this fic. POst your others here to, please? Pretty please? I really wanna re-read your "Innocence" fics! Or get your site back up soon! I'm starting to get withdrawal symptoms!
Great work, as always.
Tayles.x |
Reviewed By: anonymous celebrity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah! Go Trowa! Kill that !@#$% Nakki guy... grr, I hate the bastard. And these new developments with Rickard... very interesting stuff you're setting up here. I'm intrigued. Keep writing! ^.^ I'll be waiting on you. |
Reviewed By: Sheiakurei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
**creeps from the darkness** hhheeeeellllooooo my dear writter! *stalkes her* oh wait.. I'm not stalking you!! i'm just.. uhh following you around! yeah...
Anyways.. now that I found you, you better believe I'm gonna nag you about this fic. I wanna read more more more I tell yeah!! **sniffles** FF.net be mean to us. It abandoned moi.. ima abandon it! err not really. I still have some fav authors there. In any case... continue soon eh? ^.^ |
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